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- "Very hot and steamy write...The way it reads, there is just enough, subtleness in it to make it provoking. I almost felt as if I was living in a "Lolita" scene, you know, hot sweltering day, driving up to some old desolate motel, wiping the gritty dust from from my neck with a handkerchief, while "Lolita playfully waited in the doorway for me, swiping the sweat off her ice cream cone, with delicious lashing licks of promise, like crushed velvet against her form.....While symphonies of bliss play in the halls. Bravo young lady!!!"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Crescendo Me" by poe_lover28
- "The emotion in this poem is clearly shown. This is a work of art that I would read when I too am feeling that way. Thanks for showing me that there are others who feel this way. It helps to know your not alone. Great write!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Show Of The Weak& Helpless" by poe_lover28
- "What is the meaning to that which is left when we come to realize, perhaps much too late, we were merely just two parallels, that never really had a chance of coming together? I suppose it is meant, we stay as close as we can, together, beneath......r a i n"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Beneath...r a i n" by poe_lover28
- "Ive no doubt that you will "find a way"... from my view to like you requires no work at all... maybe its just so easy it seems hard? you will be the only one to decide this question, you are your own and no one else can make you... great write..."
Posted by Unknown on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "This work really made my heart race, it is so strong and slightly surreal, the message is so clear and hits right between the eyes. I could read this over and over all night long and still not have enough. You have taken my breath away with this work my dear, truly outstanding."
Posted by Unknown on "Beneath...r a i n" by poe_lover28
- "Such depth... I could relate to this in my younger years. Don't fall victim to picking yourself apart, especially on account of others. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
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