Beneath...r a i n

By poe_lover28


~~words of eloquence..
     ..flow from his thoughts..
unto paper of.. treasured fondness
from his lips..
                  unto my skin
touching..kissing
                                         lighter than a feather
feather of the raven...
from which we met
spoken and                                  s i l e n t
promises
which we kept
words still...flow....
water.. ~cascades around us
covering naked bodies
as we do one another
words, all we have now
sweet phrases
ridding the bitter taste
past lovers have left
breaking off                                                                 ..pieces of heart
not shattering.  .  . slowly removed
                                                    a chipped wine glass is left
which is my   heart
and his full of memoirs
             of those who are           g o n e
together we {mend}
   moving -passed-
never though do we forget
 
under this  rain..
.
..
...
we desire
one another
under this waterfall
we burn with Passion
fluid is hot...evaporating

there is no guise
no ..mask
only us...beneath our rain
surviving what is left for us
before...
i need i crave, no longer my buzz ..instead him..my destination within his heart..his happiness
.
..
...
beneath this rain
we quench a t h i r s t
not lust..not quite love..all too real that is for lovers in a facade
under their rain
finding new           d r e a m s
create promises
…(wrapped)…in l a c e
A gift
from who?
           god?
what is              god?
who is                            g o d
all I know
..is us..
                         .
                          …
                           …..
                            …….
beneath our           r a i n
not baptizing
but Relishing
in our       sins
we are   h e r e
beneath the     rain
that is ours
all I have
is your h e a r t beat
uneven breaths
against  imperfect skin
this is us
only us
beneath
o u r r a i n

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Copyright 2014 poe_lover28
Published on Tuesday, January 21, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Numbers Peppelini On Monday, February 3, 2014, Numbers Peppelini (76)By person wrote:

    What is the meaning to that which is left when we come to realize, perhaps much too late, we were merely just two parallels, that never really had a chance of coming together? I suppose it is meant, we stay as close as we can, together, beneath......r a i n

  • A former member wrote: This sounds like love in its most genuine form... beautiful write and as distant from "sin" as one can get...

  • poe_lover28 On Sunday, February 2, 2014, poe_lover28 (164)By person wrote:

    oh thank you that means alot Justin!

  • A former member wrote: This work really made my heart race, it is so strong and slightly surreal, the message is so clear and hits right between the eyes. I could read this over and over all night long and still not have enough. You have taken my breath away with this work my dear, truly outstanding.

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