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starved of my own world
By poe_lover28
in silence i ambulate
in silence i create
a world with only me
a world without catastrophe
where i can be free
in silence i invent
in silence without consent
a world with color all around
a world where i am not bound
where i cannot be found
in the quiet i meander
in the quiet i wish to candor
a home that is not a home
rooms are full but im alone
where happiness is not prone
in the quiet my reflexes slow
in the quiet the boat in my mind can row
a home slowly poisoning my mind and soul
where my mood is black as coal
in the chaos i lose control, my power is gone
in the chaos i bow to the queen for i am a pawn
mirages of my world dissipate
visions of happiness i can no longer create
because this place is no home, but a residence of hate and pain
in the chaos ive lost it all, have nothing, am nothing, all order is to
cease existing
i plead for someone, something, and somewhere that is kind
only so long before i am drained, cannot regenerate until ive lost humanity,
gained insanity
until ive lost my mind
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Copyright 2014 poe_lover28
Published on Monday, January 13, 2014.
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful work. I love the concept of escaping to your own world, a 9 for sure
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, poe_lover28
(164)
wrote:
Thank you very much ! :)
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
This work is superb and almost divine; I have to give it a 9.
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Lol I thought I got a ten :( my soul is crushed good sir or madame
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A former member wrote:
You finally posted it :) Truly an outstanding write my dear, and I am so sorry you feel this way.
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Oh don't you feel sorry, you make me happy and distract me from it all, don't be so sweet ♥
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Really awesome write; love it. You deserve a 10. And a 10 you shall have. 10
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Thank youu very much I appreciate it :)
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A former member wrote:
Love this...exactly how I feel inside...exactly. Excellent wordings, and I can feel the pain.
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On Monday, January 13, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
I am glad you enjoyed and am sorry that you share the same pan as I.
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