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Crescendo Me
By poe_lover28
etch yourself..
...into---my skin
spending..eternity
against me
a simple pleasure
---press me---
into..our sheets
so thin
crushed velvet
...supple against my form...
reminds me of your caress
making..me bless
heavens i don't believe in
especially when you..pin me down
{ethereal pleasures}
unknown..without your touch
....its all too much....
can't get enough
{vaporous moans}
..reflect off the walls
..symphonies of bliss
play in the halls
..of titillation
opening act of a gentle kiss..
turns into an all night composition
this position...
that position...
bringing me to
.......crescendo.......
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Copyright 2014 poe_lover28
Published on Thursday, February 6, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Crescendo Me"
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A former member wrote:
I loved this one, steamy, provoking and a very enjoyable read. I hope I can write that well soon
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On Tuesday, March 18, 2014, Peyton1
(204)
wrote:
You seem to have quite a talent for pushing the reader directly into this erotic scene with the sound waves that echo from your pen! I could barely hear it at first, but as I read on, I became convinced the people next door would surely be awakened if the volume remained for very long at such an intensely high level! "making me bless heavens I don't believe in"...Nice! Well written miss Brea, a very hottt read, for sure a 10........... ~ACE~
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On Wednesday, February 19, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
I usually don't like poems about sex but this is brilliant! I want this feeling!!! I love the subtlety of it.. Great write :)
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On Thursday, February 20, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
thank you very much, im glad you liked it
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A former member wrote:
Mmmm you do know how to get the blood pumping don't you? You tried your hand at erotica and definitely succeeded, fantastic write.
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On Thursday, February 20, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
awhh Cam, thank you baby , very sweet of you that means alot
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On Thursday, February 6, 2014, Numbers Peppelini
(76) wrote:
Very hot and steamy write...The way it reads, there is just enough, subtleness in it to make it provoking. I almost felt as if I was living in a "Lolita" scene, you know, hot sweltering day, driving up to some old desolate motel, wiping the gritty dust from from my neck with a handkerchief, while "Lolita playfully waited in the doorway for me, swiping the sweat off her ice cream cone, with delicious lashing licks of promise, like crushed velvet against her form.....While symphonies of bliss play in the halls. Bravo young lady!!!
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On Thursday, February 6, 2014, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
awh what a thoughtful comment, Lolita I love that movie, a friend of mine calls me a Lolita lol, thank you very much!
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