Comments by All Members
- "another surreal mindscape,that holds much meaning, and a strange essence,that you have realised and captured, with style, so impressive,compelling,and a joy to read, another favourite"
Posted by Anth on "Madness Insipid" by MercyRain
- "I would love to meet up with you, get pissed and talk this kind of stuff with you real time. Drinks will be on me - you're an interesting dude! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "I note you allude to Baltimore, which is close to my "home" in Virginia - when I finally return to the States, if I ever resolve whatever it is I think I might find, "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- " so comepelling,outstanding, many parets jumping out at me,my fasdcination becomeing maddenly stronger as i read on,so excellently constructed. sigh, this is so so cool"
Posted by Anth on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "This is scripted, and this is not a snuff film. It is the ballerina sacrificing herself in the name of Art." Wonderful imagery throughout and many deep points conveyed in a bit of an Alice and Wonderland kind of way..."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "This is such a great piece!!! My favourite line and image is your "Hidden in the backlight, the ballerina has stopped dancing and has busted out the window and is using the glass to slice her wrists, deep and red. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Insipid Madness" by MercyRain
- "'a syntax
dictating an exactness
for a whole gamut
of
depth' like a mad cyberDrug: this poem breathes... something... a kind of enigmaRiddle metal fleshed disease let loose; it glows."
Posted by Unknown on "the Virus" by MercyRain
- "and now the irony being that within language's confines i can't quite qualify why this piece is so very impressive. >:) dictionaries are shifting beasts... great micro and macro work."
Posted by purr_verse on "the Virus" by MercyRain
- "This has so much truth in it, its impossible to define love, and the term is thrown around too loosely to even mean anything now...amazing write"
Posted by Unknown on "On Love" by MercyRain
- "i think i anthropomorphise too much. i found it deeply sad rather than creepy...felt pity for the bonetrees...
Gods, maybe i've just got it all wrong. But I really liked it. dang. >:) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Winter in a Birch-Wood" by MercyRain
- "are you drowning or just wading, my dear? or do you wish to drown just to feel again? i have been wondering on this: the poetic indulgence, the aesthetic indulgence of the normal to make it a luscious surreal ... "
Posted by apophenia on "the Dragon Cycle: Recycled Yet Again" by MercyRain
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