Comments by All Members
- "She definitely wasn't trying to fill your head full of shit and you became stronger by her doing so. She must love you very much. You got gut's. Keep them burning. Thank you."
Posted by Phalanx on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "You're so pretty when you're angry. The truth behind it is, fuck I really hope I dont have a daughter either. Having sisters worries me enough. If something were to happen to them I dont know what I would do. Then as a man I have to think, what if this happened to me? What if I had been taken over, stripped of pride and forced into feeling less... Even with my own suit of armor I dont think I could carry on as the same man. I've always been close to strong-willed women and it makes sense to feel I need you around to not only protect, but to be protected by things that may or may not be too hard for me. I admire you, always.... for still being completely beautiful inside and out despite not only this, but so much else that I know has tried to strike you down. You're a savage warrior she-wolf with her cub and im just a hunter who can't pull the trigger. A man who eats those in his path because the hunger to grow and create trumps the hunger to be understood. One day though, I will find where you rest and I will join you there."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
- "The teen years are a challenge, when limits and patience are always being tested, as our children become master manipulators. And out daughters' choices can be stark and subservient to the culture that holds us all in its sway, but some day... cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
- "That Georgia red clay can be pesky. Always felt like "unconditionally" was a term meant for robots maybe. Deeply delicate, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "Mala ... ohhhhh fuck me . i damn.. wow. no fuck wow. lol straight up you are a bad bitch in poetry. period! i salute. you can make dark darker disturbing so beautiful can't help but want it. the way you put it i'd tattoo it. mmmmmhhmmmhhmm..."
Posted by Devilish on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
- "your treatment and method of delivery left me feeling like an eavesdropper on a private conversation that spoke volumes ... there's a certain amount of scorn in here ... appearing as back-handed compliments...and a deep and healthy respect for your Mother in her wisdom... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "I couldn't stay away from you if i tried like i said the very first time i read you . where the fuck did you come from. brilliant and my mother told me once.. to air is human .. what is your excuse?.. i still don't have one.. bows poet."
Posted by Devilish on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "All consuming is a tall order for anyone..but any less a pursuit..is effortless commons. I like that idea. I bet she was ah wise one. Thanks "
Posted by mastadave2999 on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "this is absolutely amazing. a lot of the lines in this had such philosophical truth embedded within them. just perfect. "
Posted by Unknown on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "Coddling a divergent child can have its... Pitfalls, one that your mother seemed to have navigated gracefully. This is a masterful write. One the echoes and reverberates the soul of both the mother and the child. I for one, have not had the privilege to be embraced by its doctrine.
Gaslighting... How very apropos. I mean to backhand you in that champagne bathtub. Jealousy has no bounds of beseech. Your mother was as wise as one that can be called just that...and for this, and the read, I am renewed as one of divergence."
Posted by tmanzano on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "this actually gave me a full body shiver and i clenched my teeth. loving unconditionally with your everything can be a curse, but it can also be beautiful in moderation. i love you."
Posted by dramamine on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "How did I miss this one? The violent tone here is quite the collection of puncture wounds, all the while imparting hard-won wisdom. There is nothing safe about this poem, yet I sense the protective nature of a tough-love at the end & in the author's note. There are scenes here that make me feel sufficiently angry & awful. Thanks for kicking my angst in the nuts & not drowning it in the darkness. This one is harsh. Kudos. "
Posted by Unknown on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
- "Oh sweetie, it is so much more. The brilliant you could change the world. The ugly knew it and got jealous... And girlfriend, I'm not talking surface. So much more. Wonderful write. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
- "I don't care if it isn't but this is totally about me and it makes me all mushy. On a serious note: play with words like you have in this one. It suits you to add these things together in such a way. The closeness of sounds but thebdistance of meaning is the most striking part about this, of course below the meaning. I love your smartz"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
- "i can appreciate this piece fully. Strange how we fool ourselves, but then again, not so strange at all... Nothing lasts forever, except the cycle"
Posted by Unknown on "Sex with a Twin" by Maladroit
- "Pure darkness, a vivid illustration of pain. Reading such pieces is like studying in school; I learn a lot in accordance to my writing skill on this site. Keep it up! :] "
Posted by Void Vortex on "Allocating Sun Rays" by Maladroit
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