Allocating Sun Rays

By Maladroit

She's
clutching glitter,
fist-fucking her ear canal
allocating sun rays
to spew
from a mouth that speaks shards of glass.

He's
knee deep,
wallowing in a childhood rut
cursing his mother
for failing
to teach perception: the mud-hole as a pond.

She's
carving butter knife etchings,
pleading for him to read,
to comprehend his own potential-
to finally see:


"It wouldn't have mattered if she was around
when it only takes a tablespoon to drown;
floaties and crutches are both elective,
bag your buderns with more selection."


 

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Copyright 2013 Maladroit
Published on Monday, May 20, 2013.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • Void Vortex On Friday, September 6, 2013, Void Vortex (303)By person wrote:

    Did I really say keep it up? :/

  • Void Vortex On Thursday, August 22, 2013, Void Vortex (303)By person wrote:

    Pure darkness, a vivid illustration of pain. Reading such pieces is like studying in school; I learn a lot in accordance to my writing skill on this site. Keep it up! :]

  • dwells On Thursday, May 23, 2013, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Haven't heard of them "floaties" in years, since the Red Cross swimming lessons for my daughters. The age-old battle of He and She will ever be (Rodin should have had a lady for a model of "The Thinker") - cheers!

  • Strataic On Tuesday, May 21, 2013, Strataic (100)By person wrote:

    Your words are always powerful, I have missed them. :) Scholar

  • A former member wrote: this reaches so many searching hands but they all come to clear focus. the second and last stanza floored me. the pieces all just fall into place, no stone left uncovered. you offer just the right portion, no unneeded words or making smoke signals, no circling and recircling the point. you write like an excellent chess player, a disciple of sun tzu. great vision, forward thinking, understanding of your opponent and yourself, driven method, balance, humility. it is a rare treat to have you post again so soon. thank you. Scholar


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