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- "I like that it's shaped in a perfume bottle for one. It's a very vivid poem. I like they way it's written. Perhaps you should write for saw? Good though. I liked it."
Posted by Unknown on "Time to Die" by prodigy789
- "Damn! WOW! The second stanza rocked me. your a hello of a man .. murder i'm sure was on your mind.. I salute you .. and I wanna call her all kind of things but if you can refrain from murder than I surely can refrain from name calling...=).. hello there you .. thank you for your comments.. "
Posted by Devilish on "I Saw You" by prodigy789
- "Not bad, well structured and an on-beat rhyme schema; Best one I read from you after I read a few, so decided to comment. I like the nigh sarcastic socio-political tone to this poem, reminds me of ones I've written in the past. Great job, hope to see more like this.."
Posted by Skye on "You Screwed the World..." by prodigy789
- "I liked this poem because of the progression it had throughout. Instead of dragging on about one little thing you can follow the person seeing it and their thoughts. One thing you should fix is that faithful has one L. Good job."
Posted by Unknown on "I Saw You" by prodigy789
- "AHHHH dude I feel you!!! My dad will call me while his at a different state and STILL call me a bitch! I'm like, what the fuck! Thank you so much for sharing this"
Posted by Unknown on "Respect " by prodigy789
- "*you've chipped and you've chiseled me down to my core
way passed the ice that was guarding the door* passed sounds like a typo with *past* sounds better, and makes more sense. It has very beautiful imagery. Absolutely stunning!"
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "A Chiseled Heart of Ice" by prodigy789
- "this has a nice, light, trippy feel to it. beauty in the eye of the beholder; a taste of the love bug or infatuation perhaps.
nicely worded..quite enjoyed.
there are a few spelling errors that spell check can fix before you post. keep 'em coming."
Posted by natalie on "What I See" by prodigy789
- "This was gutwrenching, and sad...why should you call him your dad? HE´s the bitch, the monster, not you..."
Posted by Unknown on "Respect " by prodigy789
- "this was originally much longer and more brutal but i lost the original so i tried to remember it but only remembered what is on here :)"
Posted by prodigy789 on "A Choice..." by prodigy789
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