Bi-polar

By prodigy789

What goes up  must come down as is with all

its the sudden stop that kills you, it is not the fall

so if you never stop to die, and just keep falling down

eventually the world flips over, and the demon becomes the clown

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Copyright 2012 prodigy789
Published on Thursday, June 21, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: omg love this XD im BI-Polar by the way

  • A former member wrote: powerful,i enjoyed, cant wait to read more

  • prodigy789 On Sunday, June 24, 2012, prodigy789 (31)By person wrote:

    2 young 4 this pain. its ok if you dont understand. i have bipolar it has its ups and downs. some days you feel like you are on top of the world other times you feel buried beneath the dirt this is just my interpretation of the cycle is all :)

  • A former member wrote: Nice :] i like it...but i dont get it...but i don't get alot of thing xD

  • namelessmadi On Friday, June 22, 2012, namelessmadi (34)By person wrote:

    I really loved the last line of this :) Even though its so simple it is so powerful! Great job :)

  • katlady121690 On Thursday, June 21, 2012, katlady121690 (19)By person wrote:

    I always loved your writing. cant wait to read more.

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