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I Saw You
By prodigy789
I saw through the window as you said "I love you..." to him
I witnessed
the betrayal
I wanted to say something to you
But yet I remain
faithfull
I saw through the door as you made love to him
I witnessed the adultry
I wanted to burst into the room
As
you sweat inside so sultry
I watched you look him in the eyes
as he came inside you
I witnessed the conclusion
I wanted to
murder the both of you
In a cryptic and sad allusion
to
the sight i saw that night and how it made me feel
I died within
And just a thought
Vindiction is a sin
And to you my
sweet...
Goodbye my love....
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Copyright 2012 prodigy789
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On Thursday, July 5, 2012, Devilish
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wrote:
Damn! WOW! The second stanza rocked me. your a hello of a man .. murder i'm sure was on your mind.. I salute you .. and I wanna call her all kind of things but if you can refrain from murder than I surely can refrain from name calling...=).. hello there you .. thank you for your comments..
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A former member wrote:
I liked this poem because of the progression it had throughout. Instead of dragging on about one little thing you can follow the person seeing it and their thoughts. One thing you should fix is that faithful has one L. Good job.
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A former member wrote:
Well written, friend. A lot to think about...
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