Comments by All Members
- "Wow,,I don't know if I could stand there and wait for it,,,Damn,,I'd run like a rabbit,,that bastard will work to take me,,,hahaha,,great write sir,"
Posted by Jerry stiles on "Stands Death There At My Door" by midnights voice
- "Great piece and really good use of imagery to create a mood. The setting of her gazing out at a lake was very effective. I especially liked the lines "It has become more complicated
than it should have ever been" - a think that is a simple line that resonates with MANY people. Good job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Ring" by midnights voice
- "Quite moving an experience that was . I sometimes feel a connection in places where nothing remais but the monument markers where people's lives haves condensed into date of birth and death and name and little more ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Cemetery ( five word )" by midnights voice
- "I used to do some of my best writing in a cemetery back in my hometown. It was very old and the gravesides were visually clustered by some of the most haunting headstones I had ever seen. One headstone in particular [that really moved me] was literally an erected slab, possibly a 5 x 4, with a statue of a woman embracing a baby in a bed. I mean, the detail was so impressive and carved with such sentiment, I actually wept for the woman and child buried together beneath. After all these years, I still remember. Such nostalgia in five words. Excellent, MV. I will cherish this one:)"
Posted by Devil lyn on "Cemetery ( five word )" by midnights voice
- "Yes when two people are one and it comes to a separation there is only pain and destruction as the cutting apart occurs . And healing takes on a lifetime to happen . And all that remains are the mental photograph books that we flip through all of the time ."
Posted by midnights voice on "The Ring" by midnights voice
- "Wow ... this was quite painful to read having tasted my fair share of divorce only there wasn`t a lake just the sun and a very hot day. At least with the lake there is peace and serenity; with the sun, there's only bitter and rage ... I remember that day very well."
Posted by Devil lyn on "The Ring" by midnights voice
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