Comments by All Members
- "This is a gripping look at life and its constant challenges. The cold world exposed harshly to the innocent eye, is a heart clincher, as it strengthens the will to survive. And so with a deep breath we take in that next page of life. nice thought provoker :)~"
Posted by blue angel on "As A Kid" by LostInDarkness
- "this is good. this is true i can tell you someones whole life. but my own? o well. nice write"
Posted by Unknown on "As A Kid" by LostInDarkness
- "There ya go...you take life as it comes.We change as we start to see the dirtier side of the world...you don't let it get to you...turn you cold...you fight on."
Posted by Honey on "As A Kid" by LostInDarkness
- "Quite a lonely piece, the words come to me as if being mumbled in one's mind, trying desperately trying to make sense. Such a confusion of emotions, you want her, you don't want her. The things you mean and the things you don't. And then after all of it, being torn between two lots of different things... it all come to conclude, a melancholy goodbye. Wow, quite heart shattering but a brilliant piece indeed. Portrayed what one can feel exactly in such a situation, battling with the mind's different contemplations of what the heart really wants. Cheers, thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "I know how this feels, some people don't realize how hard we try, in everything. Nice write. Quite personal I take it. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by Symbol on "Your Everything" by LostInDarkness
- "A very fun write - glad you were able to hook up last night - lol. Luke wasn't easy for me to write with as his style can be hard and even intimidating to match, but this flowed very nicely, congratulations - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "'And Then They Came - (Feat Detriment)'" by LostInDarkness
- "Melancholic. I often don't feel like smiling but still do. Just so they don't see me sad, cos sad is not desirable and maybe weak...I know we should be true to ourselves, but I don't want to explain..just let me be..
YOU obviously can do something - write beautiful poem like this one. I like your writing. Enough said"
Posted by BloodCountess on "Mineshaft" by LostInDarkness
- "Hello LostInDarkness! *rises her arm with a candelabra* Where were you? I was looking for you!
This poem is beautiful, I agree with Loki and Toxic - they don't get us, their loss! This great work :)
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Posted by BloodCountess on "Who i am" by LostInDarkness
- "absolutly loved this piece. it really spoke to me in the dark times I am going through losing my boyfriend yesterday.. I read this and felt like it was him that wrote that to me. it was kind of scary."
Posted by katlady121690 on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "A beautiful good bye. So hard to let go, but one needs to, must move on, so he can live his life to the fullest too.
This is wonderful poem, sad and emotional"
Posted by BloodCountess on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "true and honent depiction, liked the way you you chaptered this out, allowed the recipient the get a feel for an overall situation that played out over time.. raw piece indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "Lost... I'm touched. This piece really made me cry at how realistic this is... And like Robyn said, it's hard to let someone go, and it's best to give up the things we love at times. Best regards, friend. I hope to see more and be emotionally pulled like this one."
Posted by Unknown on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "we were always meant to burn out,love.I see that now. But we were beautiful while we lasted. I will always love you.and maybe that's silly of me.but you were always the brightest flame in my life.ill miss you.I do already."
Posted by Doll Eyes on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "I've had to say goodbye to few that I wasn't good for even though I loved them. That's how you know you love someone - when it's in their best interest to let them go even though it is hard and you want to keep them. This was very well written - It flowed Beautifully and the line breaks are perfect - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Your love is lost" by LostInDarkness
- "Besides the part of the piece "We shall torture/ the two/ just like mommy/ did to you", it flowed nicely. And it's so catchy. I may have to sing this and post it on her. lol My compliments and credit to you, though, Lost."
Posted by Unknown on "lullaby to Devilish " by LostInDarkness
- "She won't like it, she will LOVE it! haha - I love it too, well done ;) I love waking up in the morning to fun stuff like this - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "lullaby to Devilish " by LostInDarkness
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