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"You really created quite the visual experience through your words. Such great imagery to accompany such a terrific write. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "If I Could Not Dream" by Cassidello

"grandma muffins sounds really tasty right about now. thank you this read. Enjoyed it very much."
Posted by Jesse Guzman on "Grandma's Sweater" by Cassidello

"I couldn't look away! great writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "Memory Lane" by Cassidello

"Some wonderful descriptions... utterly amazing work.... *speechless* Cheers for the read and welcome to Dark Poetry :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Memory Lane" by Cassidello

"I'm always going down memory lane, I won't stop going"
Posted by Jesse Guzman on "Memory Lane" by Cassidello

"Brilliant. I just reposted one of my horror pieces after reading this. Awesome. "
Posted by Dominic on "She Use to Live There Once" by Cassidello

"How FUN! Welcome to the valley, I look forward to reading more of you. I love the gore and imagination - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "She Use to Live There Once" by Cassidello

"your author's note made it all clear. thanks for posting."
Posted by natalie on "Giants" by Cassidello

"The Lady of the Lake gone bad perhaps. But wondering about a scalpel in the kitchen drawer still - how about a rusty claever maybe? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "She Use to Live There Once" by Cassidello

"I like it a lot. I used to walk around in cemeteries when I was depressed. Made me feel like I was one-up on everybody else. Never did any dancing though. Awesome feel and cool style with this. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Cemetery Ballerina" by Cassidello

"Sad tale of mournful misery that some seem to relish as a dancing partner throughout life, well done and a fine metaphor."
Posted by dwells on "Cemetery Ballerina" by Cassidello

"...nice write: a dark swan dancing into the depths of her torment... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Cemetery Ballerina" by Cassidello

"This is a good post, great imagery, and I love the concept. Great write"
Posted by Unknown on "Cemetery Ballerina" by Cassidello

"I think it works...usually it's the ballerina with the flesh shredding form her feet with all the physical and emotional pain being a dancer entails...here dancing 'till she drops into her self made hell...the visuals I saw in black and white like a flickering old movie...and of course her dress is white...thanks..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Cemetery Ballerina" by Cassidello

"Fantastical Magnificent Intense expressions of the Raw truth. Thank you"
Posted by Unknown on "Giants" by Cassidello

"What do You feel? I feel this. Profound work."
Posted by Dominic on "Memory Lane" by Cassidello

"I really dig poetry that tells a wicked story, like this one. I too have a few murderous characters that pop up from time to time. Awesome write. Looking forward to more. til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Grandma's Sweater" by Cassidello

"WOW! That was so twisted and awesome! Great ideas and imagery! I loved it! So entertaining! Btw, will you comment on some of mine?"
Posted by Unknown on "Grandma's Sweater" by Cassidello

""NO RETURN FROM MEMORY LANE HERE YOU SHALL REMAIN" Panic and horror flows through my veins As the monsters now lash at my face And the demons they all know my name! And the voices surely keep me insane And the once smooth road now covered in shattered tar Cut my knees, cut my feet and leave me memorable scars Forbiddance was cast upon me, to keep way from memory lane To blind me from the hidden evils For all truth surfaced and learned Prevented my return And shadows now forever whisper to me "Forget not ever, your "beautiful" memories" These are to me the Most Impressive and Favored of your lines. A truly incredible piece. Continue penning and I'll look forward to reading. "
Posted by Unknown on "Memory Lane" by Cassidello

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