Giants

By Cassidello

Once you're finished, thats all you need
It reaches your mind, it will bleed
Coughing and weezing, dying before your eyes
Choking youself, gasping for air, too distant
When suddenly you disappear
And everything hits you like a Kamikaze
But it all slows to speed

While your thoughts knock you around
And one more time, you hope to live
Closing your eyes tighter grasping imagination
Trying to breath
As you're tormented by your fading good fortunes
Everything falls with you in the end.

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Copyright 2012 Cassidello
Published on Friday, May 11, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is my view on what happens to people who have it all, when suddenly it comes to a too quick unexpected end. Also included is the astonishment that comes with it, and all that you lose.
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  • A former member wrote: Fantastical Magnificent Intense expressions of the Raw truth. Thank you

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