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- "I agree very much so with specter.. I noticed you used some of the same analogies that you did with another. It worked out well. Good Job"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "The Angel" by horrorchantenshi
- "this is very cute and sweet.. I have been with my soon to be husband for 3 years and I have yet to be able to write about our love. I think that's a good thing... I feel that if I put words to the emotion then it might go away.... and I would die without him so... thanks for the write. Keep writing... the more you do the easier it'll be. Rhymes will just pop out of no where and it'll all flow beautifully. :)"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "Hello" by horrorchantenshi
- "This is so sad.. there are way too many people who get away with this every single day... I dealt with it coming from my own parents so I understand that pain. Check out some of my stuff. We write about a lot of the same stuff. Some pain just needs to come out as poem in order for others to truly understand what we've been screaming the whole time. Thanks for this write."
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "What they say." by horrorchantenshi
- "it me again... I have a habit of when I read a new poet I read ALL of there work. you have talent... that's for sure.. your pain is so real and the depth is about to drown me, but the words make it hard to follow without re-reading it a few times. You know you can edit any of your work at any time? Just a suggestion. I really enjoy your work tho. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. ;)"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "The real fake Barbie." by horrorchantenshi
- "This one brought tears to my eyes... but once again some of the words just seem "shoved" into place.. you know..? When I'm having a hard time comparing certain words I write down ALL the words that rhyme or ones that would work until it all just falls into place. :)"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "Take Me" by horrorchantenshi
- "this brought back some unwanted memories but at the same time I'm glad that I can still remember the pain... It helps me be who I am today. This is very deep but I agree with the one comment... I would have liked to see more length... This could go in any direction.. who knows... perhaps you have inspired me to write an ending for it.../???? Ha ha. hit me up and maybe we can come up with it together....?"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "A little Broken Heart" by horrorchantenshi
- "Again, I feel that some of your word choice would help the flow of the poem, as the rhymes seem forced or chopped. I watched a house burn down before, and it's a scary thing to see. Being the cause of it would probably make me feel much like this. I like your insight to the realistically tragic. Kudos."
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "Take Me" by horrorchantenshi
- "I really like this poem. People can be very mean an insensitive, especially during our younger years. I especially was fond of the line "I have all I got." That one really hit home. I hope to see more work of yours soon! Welcome to D.P! (If you need anything, don't be afraid to shoot me a mail or comment :3 )"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "What they say." by horrorchantenshi
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Liked it, I'm not one for angels, we don't get along well. But for this I'll make an exception. nice write."
Posted by Unknown on "The Angel" by horrorchantenshi
- "just read The Devil, and now this. these 2 pieces compliment each other well. light and dark, yin and yang. well done."
Posted by Patches on "The Angel" by horrorchantenshi
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