A little Broken Heart
By horrorchantenshi
Hidden inside, was a small girl
Sighing and crying, from a bad world
In the woods she's alone, in a small house
Living forever, with no air to shout.
Being a month with nothing to eat,
And every day a man comes to beat.
Why won't they love her? What has she done?
She's scared that she'll die, in front of no one.
Dried blood on her mouth from no water or food,
two dead on the floor all beaten with crude.
And not to mention, the ones that are dead,
Her mom and her dad, with wounds in their head.
A knock on the door, in comes the old man,
and knife and a gun are in his old hands.
He blindly swings, and she ducks just in time,
Before he could commit his unlawful crime.
But he does it again, with a crack to her head
And a pop from his gun, she lay down in red.
Her small little heart broken from hate,
And no one to love her. No hand to take.
Author's Note:
I wrote this in like 5 minutes during English, i fixed it a bit.... if there is some tweeks that need to be made please speak up.Comments on "A little Broken Heart"
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A former member wrote:
This to me asked a lot of questions, and a lot of possibilities in this hazard, the rhymes, at times make it even better. I like it a lot.
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(103) wrote:
this brought back some unwanted memories but at the same time I'm glad that I can still remember the pain... It helps me be who I am today. This is very deep but I agree with the one comment... I would have liked to see more length... This could go in any direction.. who knows... perhaps you have inspired me to write an ending for it.../???? Ha ha. hit me up and maybe we can come up with it together....?
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On Monday, January 7, 2013, horrorchantenshi
(36) wrote:
Yeah that would be great!!
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On Thursday, March 22, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70) wrote:
I really like it, although I would like to see maybe a little more length. It also seems there are some forced rhymes here, but still, it was great! Thanks for the post.
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A former member wrote:
So sad...so true though. It's happening everyday. I admire your work, though there are a few things you might want to change as you look through it again =)
Nevertheless, it's a work of genius!
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On Friday, March 9, 2012, horrorchantenshi
(36) wrote:
yea thanx it is perty sad... but i love it!