Comments by All Members
- "I liked that you were able to take a well known story and shape it into something unique here. The idea that the individual turned to stone perhaps found themselves in this situation out of an attempt to free with love rather than by having been seeking glory or a weapon. I'm not sure what the structure of the contest this was originally submitted for was and that has me curious. Either way, nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Medusa (contest entry)" by dumbone
- "I really like your take on that struggle to find words that are true and represent you. Words can drag us down but when we catch ourselves right,mother can be the most uplifting thing ever."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A wish for words " by dumbone
- "Dum - some fine thoughts and I think personally, that every poem written was once a proud moment of the heart (if sober). For a while here I thought you were about to get a full body tattoo!
I really need to get my best stuff together for posterity. It will make good kindling when they turn off the power - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "...unmarked heart..." by dumbone
- "also the lonely one sir.... thank you for the comment
and
i thank you for always being here and reading
all of my works for now.... for you are one incredible writer sir... cheers and stay well
"
Posted by dumbone on "...unmarked heart..." by dumbone
- "Well I'll leave a mark of constructive criticism, oh nevermind it won't stick. All jokes aside I liked this alot keep it up"
Posted by Unknown on "...unmarked heart..." by dumbone
- "incorporeal and immaterial perhaps Dum and wishing you well in all your endeavors my friend, cheers! "
Posted by dwells on "...one day..." by dumbone
- "Thank you so much for this one. Its´utterly beautiful. SO sad and I can relate to that lil man...keep writing. "
Posted by Unknown on "autumn man" by dumbone
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