Comments by All Members
- "Awwwww thats the second sweet poem i've seen today... I'm beginning to have a permanent smile :) thanks chicken for cheering me up!"
Posted by Solace on "Thank you ...." by Anoblechicken
- "Magazine mind-control and Beauty brain-wash. Be yourself. Screw societies Useless labels. If they can label you than they think they know you. Thats showing them otherwise. Great write ANC."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Conform" by Anoblechicken
- "Damn straight Diva! Be yourself and never give in to what society thinks you should be..all we truly have in the end is ourselves. I enjoyed this piece! "
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Conform" by Anoblechicken
- "Hey, cool. This has a stream-of-counsciousness feel to it, but with a well thought-out flow. The only part I think doesn't quite fit is the last line... other than that, awesome. Don't let them take your soul... and kick them in the nuts when they try!"
Posted by stormtalk on "Conform" by Anoblechicken
- "I hear this... Every day of high school was a constant nervousness resulting from what others would think of me because i refused to conform, its wrong... "
Posted by Solace on "Conform" by Anoblechicken
- "Cleverly done... good cutting poems are rare, and I can't say I like the idea of cutting, but this is definitely a good poem. Reminds me of a version of that Christmassy song with the doves... but more from a Nighmare Before Christmas perspective."
Posted by stormtalk on "10 single edged razor blades" by Anoblechicken
- "Hahaha, this is awesome. You have a mind for the foul. You're a good writer and you seem like a cool person... on my fav's list you go!"
Posted by stormtalk on "The Bathroom" by Anoblechicken
- "then stay away from ecstasy. Cumulative brain damage is not a good plan, not to mention that you're missing out on a lot of better things. Ecstasy gives you the feeling of a beautiful revelation, but without the revelation. It's like lying to yourself."
Posted by stormtalk on "Drugs" by Anoblechicken
- "The beginning of this is rather clever... seems that "ecstasy" could mean drugs, thoughts, or both. If it's drugs, though... "
Posted by stormtalk on "Drugs" by Anoblechicken
- "It's almost impossible to write ABAB without some of them sounding forced... in the future, try free verse a little, it tends to have fun results. This poem is good stuff, though. The first stanza is particularly well-written... and too familiar."
Posted by stormtalk on "My own disaster" by Anoblechicken
- ""i swear the c0ckr0ches have there own set of wheels"......damn strait...lmao!.....omg......this is such a good visualy detailed poem...and soo funny..this is great!~YeStErDaY~"
Posted by -Oz- on "The Bathroom" by Anoblechicken
- "Ecstacy was my down fall...I took so much that I had a panic attack and wrecked into a gas station...I understand what you say..good write...**jwd**"
Posted by Petrified Wood on "Drugs" by Anoblechicken
- "True, true... Sad how it is accepted b/c we are "humans". People change, and i dont mean individuals. There must be hope :)"
Posted by Drifter on "The American way" by Anoblechicken
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