Comments by All Members
- "This has left me feeling cold, empty and I love it when words can induce their emotions onto me in this way. An excellent read - thank you so much for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "alone at night." by jodeanna
- "glad you decided to share it with us. awesome write! i am sure many here fully understand where you are coming from ..i for know that place all too well."
Posted by natalie on "alone at night." by jodeanna
- "lol love the author's note. and these lines stand out for me,'unless you have a sudden craving for bruised anatomical confetti'
' i am not a fucking bird. i never should have travelled south'. very profound write! welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "I Think I Like This Work More And More Each Time I Read It... The Bittersweet Of The Booze Flavors This Work Perfectly."
Posted by Chaos God on "drunken kisses." by jodeanna
- "One of the most uniquely set pieces to pique the passions, grown cold in the fog of forgetfulness. Thoroughly enjoyed, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "...'constellations of freckles', 'bruised anatomical confetti', seasonings that add to the flavor of this...memories haunt like ghosts..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "I like the imagery at the beginning. the thoughts of times shared. aching memories of what seemed to be simpler, happier times. well done."
Posted by Patches on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "very well written piece...I like how you've set the scene with the ghostly shopping cart as the catalyst for the memory ... nostalgia can be triggered by the most mundane of things ... well done ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "interesting. not sure what to think. it sounds as if an ex has made current contact with you and brought back old memories. or maybe you went back to a place that brings these old memories back. whatever it is, i wish you luck."
Posted by sexxykiller14 on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "No, not The Ex. This is about a lover though... the same one who inspired "Impassioned".. Thank you for your encouragement, hon. :)"
Posted by jodeanna on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "That was a good little piece, Jo. I'm intrigued... The Ex, perhaps?... But, whom-ever it was written about, it was written well. Good work."
Posted by ho Thanaton on "ghosts of walmart." by jodeanna
- "Part of it was drawn from personal childhood experience but, for the most part, it was written in an attempt to convince a very dear friend to get out of a bad situation even though they refuse to accept any help."
Posted by jodeanna on "how to spot defeat." by jodeanna
- "Jo, honey. This work elicits pure violence from me... Such brutal imagery. It generates pure hatred towards the abuser, and a drive tio protect "Lucille". Please tell me that this wasn't drawn from personal experience... G
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Posted by ho Thanaton on "how to spot defeat." by jodeanna
- "Forgive my levity on the title but I can't resist: pull the covers up as far as you can and then see what i sticking out at the opposite end (da feet) HA! Cheers (I'm bad)"
Posted by dwells on "how to spot defeat." by jodeanna
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