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  • "Thanks, Dev. Glad you like the quoted lines. Kind of a strange piece, but I wrote it after trying to take an unsucessful nap. Thanks again. Til next time -"
    Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Couch Nap" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "For your soul, for your hole - could have done a whole page on that line alone, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Couch Nap" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "WOW!!!!!! Damn.. How about a hand job.. no.. how bout one for me then.. if your not confused you dont get me at all... i love it!! bring the fucking heat every time.."
    Posted by Devilish on "Couch Nap" by Sean Mc Shane
  • ""Have to catch my breath but I never want to stop" That line made me smile. Such a pleasant beauitful picture you have made here. Thanks, Sheri"
    Posted by Vampira on "Last Dream" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "This seems somewhat softer as we see into the mind of this killer and something of what makes him tick. Everyone has their own logic and seeing his is an eye-opener for reasoning. This is shaping up to be an engaging and frightening tale."
    Posted by Amaryllis on "" Shooting Star " pt II feat. dwells" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "The mentality is wickedly abrupt; cut and dry, though life isn't ever really that. This is chilling in the reality and convincing...told so believably that it's like we know what is in the minds of psychopaths now; and being on the inside, even as a sociopath, I'd like to be out. Feverish and brutal. "
    Posted by Amaryllis on "" Shooting Star " pt. I feat. Devilish" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Thanks, h. It does suck when shrinks can play with your life thru medication(s) and what they deem is best for you. Then, in a blink of an eye . . . you're on your own. I've read a lot about Spree shooters and a good percentage have been chewed up and spit out by mental health services. And thanks for the awesome compliments, for both Dev and I. She is awesome. Thanks again, h. later - "
    Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "" Shooting Star " pt. I feat. Devilish" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "very nice writting and an excellent collab. i was at that place of being told sorry and good luck and it fucking pissed me off, minus the guns. its a feeling of hopelesness. and you captured the essence of that very well. excellent mcshane and devil!! i cant wait to read your ending and how this ends."
    Posted by haunted on "" Shooting Star " pt. I feat. Devilish" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Thanks M and I so agree. I could go on and on about shrinks, meds, groups and all that bs. Best thing I can say is the mental health empire is a snake eating itself while trying to fornicate with a dead rat. Make sense ? Neither do They. Anyway, thanks again for such high comps, M. Always a highlight. Til then - "
    Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "" Shooting Star " pt. I feat. Devilish" by Sean Mc Shane
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