Comments by All Members
- "Your not a waste of space. There is people who care dearly about you. I hope things get better for you. Remember I'm here if you need me. Nice, touching write"
Posted by Unknown on "Hate (You)" by OptimisticPessimist
- "Poignant day dreams, as I've said before, I've lost many members of my family to suicide... Be sure you will be missed, it ripped my family to pieces. I'm an observer, not one to take part....... Well penned."
Posted by Magdalena on "Would You Cry?" by OptimisticPessimist
- "I am surprised this has not been commentedon yet. I gotta change that. Having been suicidal myself, I relate to these passing thoughts. Sometimes, we need people to hear our cries, and yours ring loud and clear. This is a safe haven, man. Not only do we relate to your current struggles, but we can also help you grow as a poet. You are worth it and so long as you have a community like this, you will have a reason to live. Peace, man!"
Posted by Unknown on "Would You Cry?" by OptimisticPessimist
- "You remind me a lot of me when I was younger...and not just the hair color. Your words are honest and I hope you continue to post here. If you get to check out more of my stuff, I have a poem called "Try.". I wrote it when I was 18."
Posted by Unknown on "Good Enough" by OptimisticPessimist
- "Love the structure of this, man. I believe in your nightmares, but I can tell that Evanescence might have been a muse here. Love the song, but more importantly, love the poem. Write on, man!"
Posted by Unknown on "Nightmares" by OptimisticPessimist
- "We always sink until we reach the dismall hell that we are the makers of. Trust me when I say I know this all too well and I'm glad that I could read this piece. It brought back much that I had forgotten..."
Posted by darkdesires on "Rock Bottom" by OptimisticPessimist
- "Pretty severe for algebra, my friend! I like the structure most of all, there was a mishap with "nor" in one stanza but other than that I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for posting."
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "Rock Bottom" by OptimisticPessimist
- "Algebra sucks in high school! I had to take a college elective to learn it when I was more receptive. Penultimate stanza had a typo with N from Nor standing alone I think? Don't sell yourself short, good one, thanks"
Posted by dwells on "Rock Bottom" by OptimisticPessimist
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