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Gone
By OptimisticPessimist
Gone.
Missing.
Lost.
Rip me apart, throw me away,
So
I'm
Gone
Too.
Tolerating this?
No...
The loss of you isn't tolerated.
It's thrown
into a chest
Labeled
"Pure Hell".
Struggling with
the neediness of others.
"Stay here...I need you."
"You can't
kill yourself. Fuck no."
But I want to...
Can't you
tell I'm slowly dying anyways?
I can't stay without you.
I'm
Gone.
Missing.
Lost.
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Copyright 2012 OptimisticPessimist
Author's Note:
Again, written yesterday, posted today.Comments on "Gone"
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70)
wrote:
At what cost do we live? But at what greater loss do we die? (I do concur with crim) Thanks for posting, this is a strong work!
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
I second that notion with crimson... Hell no you can't!!
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On Saturday, January 7, 2012, OptimisticPessimist
(29) wrote:
Thank you devilish for your concern..but we'll see...
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A former member wrote:
Yeah damn right you cannot kill yourself.
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On Saturday, January 7, 2012, OptimisticPessimist
(29) wrote:
Well 1, Autumn you know I've already tried, and 2, death is a part of life and so far, life's been eh.
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