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Rock Bottom
By OptimisticPessimist
Sinking.
Drowning.
I'm slowly going under.
I hit points of pure
white.
Then drop.
Mentally pulled
By gravity
Down to darkness...
I didn't know
Hell had a
Basement.
I didn't think
Rock bottom had a
Rock bottom of quick sand.
I'm going under and
pulling,
Drowning,
You with me...
I can't
keep destroying
Everything I
Love
Because there isn't
a lot
That I love.
I can't drag
Myself,
You,
Down anymore.
Down here, screaming isn't
Heard,
Nor cared about.
Sinking,
Drowning,
How
much more down
Can
I
Go...
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Copyright 2012 OptimisticPessimist
Author's Note:
Down I go...In algebra 2 class.... Bad thoughts always come up in this class. Is it the boringness(dictionary check?) Or because I'm depressed at 11:02 AM..?Comments on "Rock Bottom"
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A former member wrote:
I feel this, I really love it.I understand what it feels like. You ever need to talk just send me a message.
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On Saturday, January 14, 2012, OptimisticPessimist
(29)
wrote:
Thanks for your concern...We'll see....
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On Thursday, January 12, 2012, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
We always sink until we reach the dismall hell that we are the makers of. Trust me when I say I know this all too well and I'm glad that I could read this piece. It brought back much that I had forgotten...
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
"I didnt know hell had a basement" Love that line!! This is quite relatable, keep up the writing, and welcome!
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, OptimisticPessimist
(29) wrote:
Thank you! Relating to the audience is good.. that's my goal
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70) wrote:
Pretty severe for algebra, my friend! I like the structure most of all, there was a mishap with "nor" in one stanza but other than that I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for posting.
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Algebra sucks in high school! I had to take a college elective to learn it when I was more receptive. Penultimate stanza had a typo with N from Nor standing alone I think? Don't sell yourself short, good one, thanks
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, OptimisticPessimist
(29) wrote:
fixed it! woops..
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