Comments by All Members
- "What a story and I vaguely recall when this happened. I think Tenerife has volcanic black sand beaches too. Good read and thanks for sharing."
Posted by dwells on "Fogbound" by darkness falls
- "WOWWWW!!!!!! Damn!! im speechless especially after the authors note.. I like your style darkness and your always kind thank you."
Posted by Devilish on "Fogbound" by darkness falls
- "Thank you all for your comments, it means a lot to me....I still rock all that music all the time Dev, you're definitely not the only one. Dwells, you're dead on about CMT, and Guardian Angel, I'm sorry if you're having a rough time, let me know if you need someone to talk to...I'm thinkin this site is gonna end up savin my life."
Posted by darkness falls on "A Song In My Heart" by darkness falls
- "You took me back to my teenage days.. i love bon jovi and skid row and all the rest .. my favorite from skid row was 18 and life to go.. thank you i didnt know there was anyone out there still listen to it but me.. =)"
Posted by Devilish on "A Song In My Heart" by darkness falls
- "I'm going through some of the same stuff that you wrote about in this poem. Remember, dark doesnt necessary have to mean evil, and demonic. Dark also means digging deep into a part you that is still hidden somewhere. In the depths of your soul, Very Good Piece."
Posted by The Guardian Angel on "A Song In My Heart" by darkness falls
- "Unrequited love does indeed deserve a name of its own and this was exemplary. Thanks for this personal and insightful piece, and I was familiar with some of the songs and artists too! Well done and cheers. Also, CMT is a generous and giving inspiration to be sure."
Posted by dwells on "A Song In My Heart" by darkness falls
- "Wish we could cheer you up here at DP. Your face does speak volumes in that you exhibit the "san paku" or "three whites" around your eyes (Japanese face language). You are indeed sad and down-hearted, if not very dispirited or worse (at least your picture is). Keep writing because you are indeed talented and we need skillful poets of all callings. Cheers, bro! "
Posted by dwells on "Self Portrait" by darkness falls
- "Mirror mirror on the wall whose the biggest pussy of them all.. Not you thats for sure... This here is so ironic in same ways ... my famous line.."beautiful".. "
Posted by Devilish on "Self Portrait" by darkness falls
- "Fucking beautiful. I love it. and perfect title. hello there you. it was nice to meet you and i really appreciate the comments on my work .. thank you so much.. "
Posted by Devilish on "Puppetmaster" by darkness falls
- "Really enjoyed this hopeless and dismal piece, reminded me somewhat of "Eater of Men" that I wrote last week. Not sure that there is really anybody pulling any strings. We need to take credit for our own motivations sometimes. And every culture has its own religion - so that is apparently a common human need, to believe in a higher power. Thanks for this well-constructed and thoughtful piece."
Posted by dwells on "Puppetmaster" by darkness falls
- "If #1 was your high school sweetheart then don't feel so bad, because we all grow up, eventually. The chick with the hots was probaly psyched by the challenge of a married man perhaps? Then as Haunted said "P" Power, or access to the eggs in caveman speak, is quite formidable - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Once Bitten, Twice Shy" by darkness falls
- "I can relate to your words, letting someone in so they can just rip me apart is no longer on the agenda of my life, I insist, been there, done that once to often..... Well penned and expressed. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Once Bitten, Twice Shy" by darkness falls
- "women can do the damnest things to a man. and that friggin sucks. but it takes two to tango. thats to bad about your ex-wife, it sounds like this other woman had a strong influence on the ending of it. the power of pussy cant be denied! now your stuck with nothing. sorry to hear that. great poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Once Bitten, Twice Shy" by darkness falls
- "Hell yeah it will.. That's exactly why i say Fuck Love!! But for those who still feel it i congradulate.. Yes.. Bastards.... Once bitten twice shy all to real..."
Posted by Devilish on "Once Bitten, Twice Shy" by darkness falls
- "That last line was beautiful tragic and haunting. This is a great poem. I know life gets hard, but there's always something worth living for. I hope you find peace and happiness! Really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!"
Posted by Unknown on "Leaving" by darkness falls
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