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Windwalker
By darkness falls
I'm standing on the edge
Darkness
Driven to this neverending
sorrow
Rejected
She told me she'd love me forever
Lies
So I try to drown the hurt and anger
Drink
But I'm still looking
for a way to go
Searching
As a cold wind blows through my soul
Frozen
I've seen Hell with my own eyes
Abyss
And part
of me wants to put an end to it all
Oblivion
But I walk these
streets
Alone
Never finding a way to go
Lost
Like
a wraith, walking through memories
Haunted
If you think I'm
worth saving
Try
But I think there's something wrong inside
Broken
Still, I walk on, down these cold streets
Forever
And after tonight I'll be gone
Goodbye....
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Comments on "Windwalker"
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A former member wrote:
You really strike nerves... all of them. A wonderful piece.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Slingnasty
(138)
wrote:
Liked the structure awesome write
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A former member wrote:
this is amazing work my man :)
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On Sunday, November 27, 2011, ColorMeToxic
(240) wrote:
This was awesome...I like the way you have written this, a lot.
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A former member wrote:
I really like the form of this poem, the one word after each stanza was awesome. Liked it alot :)
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On Saturday, November 26, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Like RM said, curious structure but very effective and a somber message well put, thanks.
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On Friday, November 25, 2011, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
wow.....i love the emotion then 1 word to explain it.,,,,,awesome
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On Friday, November 25, 2011, darkness falls
(73) wrote:
Thank-you.
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