Windwalker

By darkness falls

I'm standing on the edge
Darkness
Driven to this neverending sorrow
Rejected
She told me she'd love me forever
Lies
So I try to drown the hurt and anger
Drink
But I'm still looking for a way to go
Searching
As a cold wind blows through my soul
Frozen
I've seen Hell with my own eyes
Abyss
And part of me wants to put an end to it all
Oblivion
But I walk these streets
Alone
Never finding a way to go
Lost
Like a wraith, walking through memories
Haunted
If you think I'm worth saving
Try
But I think there's something wrong inside
Broken
Still, I walk on, down these cold streets
Forever
And after tonight I'll be gone
Goodbye....

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Published on Friday, November 25, 2011. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Windwalker"

A former member wrote: You really strike nerves... all of them. A wonderful piece.
On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Slingnasty (137) wrote:

Liked the structure awesome write
A former member wrote: this is amazing work my man :)
On Sunday, November 27, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238) wrote:

This was awesome...I like the way you have written this, a lot.
A former member wrote: I really like the form of this poem, the one word after each stanza was awesome. Liked it alot :)
On Saturday, November 26, 2011, dwells (4177) wrote:

Like RM said, curious structure but very effective and a somber message well put, thanks.
On Friday, November 25, 2011, rosemaiden (180) wrote:

wow.....i love the emotion then 1 word to explain it.,,,,,awesome
On Friday, November 25, 2011, darkness falls (73) wrote:

Thank-you.