Comments by All Members
- "'So Sunday:
Sixty degree darkness
Smoke & toothpaste' eXcellent spoking smoke jazz bones poetry ... the jazz rhtyhm works perfectly ... well done..."
Posted by Unknown on "Serenade the streetlight" by Drifter
- "Wow this was incredible and incredibly original. I agree, with sunrise comes the true darkness. Very, very well done. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "Thursday" by Drifter
- "wow...this was powerful. every line knocked me around with surprise and passion. your writing...you believe in in it. and you feel. beautiful."
Posted by Twilight on "Thursday" by Drifter
- "wow...this was beautiful in a mind opening way....definatly a way to describe time..(sorry i'm a bit in awe..can't really think of the right thing to say)...very thought provoking, the way you think of time...~oZ~"
Posted by -Oz- on "Time" by Drifter
- "You have a fantastic sense of sound and rhythm ... your lines pulse, flow, dance ... and on top of that the emotion evoked in the poetry is painful and vivid. It's fabulous. "
Posted by Sister_Morphine on "Time" by Drifter
- "it's true there is an abundance of pain, and questioning...but a hint of optimism, at least in a spiritual sense.very god write.crush.
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Posted by Unknown on "The Drama That Drives Me" by Drifter
- "gorgeous. some fab alliteration as well, along with well chosen sporadic rhyme. The eighth stanza in particular appealed to me for both emotion and format."
Posted by purr_verse on "Time" by Drifter
- " now i want to kill myself.. seriously though. you took me into a world of misery and let me wallow in it.. However you did a great job with it. it was enjoyable"
Posted by Unknown on "Time" by Drifter
- "i'm actually touched ... that was beautiful man ... you brought a whole uncontrolable rush to my head ... i was rooting for you .... fabulous man ... funguy "
Posted by capt_funguy on "Where We Are (long read)" by Drifter
- "wow...this is just amazing...one of the most simple lines was my favourite "All I want to do is make this beautiful little animal I love to the end of the earth feel better than she does". This is magic work, it makes me believe anything is possible. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "Where We Are (long read)" by Drifter
- "Wow, dude. Truly heartfelt. I found myself staring blankly at the screen, trying to gather my thoughts after I read the last few lines. I still havn't sorted out all the thoughts yet, but I know one things for sure. This is so fuckin faved."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Where We Are (long read)" by Drifter
- "_"Ungodly emotion of the anti-euphoria"...i'm familiar with this emotion...this is so beautiful...and the detail you did lend to the imagery...this was like watching a movie.awesome!-tim "
Posted by suicideseason on "Where We Are (long read)" by Drifter
- "oh, i really really like this! excellent strangejazzrhythm that just completely works for me. The opening three lines are particularly fabulous. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Serenade the streetlight" by Drifter
- "i too like the quickness of it. makes for a fast and fun read. and your words are well chosen so pretty much this piece rocks."
Posted by Twilight on "911" by Drifter
- "wow this one was interesting it sucked me back in for the third read now. now i have decided to cmment. this is the kind of piece some people dont hav th enerve to write. and you have done it. awesome..."
Posted by Twilight on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- "This is absolutely brilliant. Is going in my favourites for sure. Couple of typo's mate, but I think this is magic. If you are only 18, you are wise beyond your years and I am especially impressed. Much kudos to you. FF"
Posted by flying_fox on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- "time... i guess thats what you mean though. Memories are more valuable than gold. I'll remember man. Maybe go to school for a little while, just to meet people. Then i'm hitting the road. Hell yea. thanks man."
Posted by Drifter on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- "We did have a lot of fun together didnt we... Remember that day we played Diablo II: Lord of Destruction for 22 hours strait? Wow that was horrible. You were so fucking stoned. Makes me smile thinking about it. It sure seemed like a good idea at the t"
Posted by Drifter on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- ". She said be a teacher, you'll have summer. The thing is i dont WANT the summer, i want the whole goddamn year! I want to freeze my ass off in the dumpster behind a pizza hut. Can you imagine a more beautiful, sweet smelling sunrise?"
Posted by Drifter on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- "I know what you mean man... i did want all that. I guess i've grown out of hope in the last few months. Parents and such, worried more about my future than i am. I mean, you have a point, you dont live life with money. I told my mom i wanted to travel"
Posted by Drifter on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- "Dear Me: Yea there's a girl... Isn't there always? This one's incredalbe though... She's 1000 miles from me, and its not just a social or sexual thing. She's really cool and i hope she digs me as much as i do her."
Posted by Drifter on "P.S. I farted (Lack of a good title)" by Drifter
- ""My song is only known to a few
My song sets me apart" And this...I want to shout at the top of my lungs. So very very true!"
Posted by Unknown on "My Song" by Drifter
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