The Drama That Drives Me
By Drifter
I feel like a forgotten joke
Lost in the day's satire
Like my own life
Is merely a small part of the drama
Today squealed and scraped
Along my one track mind
And as it skids to an end
I'm left wondering once again
Questions concerning feelings
The feelings never questioned
And the perversions of love
Our psyche has donated
To their creator
I brought about this itch
The one never reached
Until tomorrow passes
And a new life begins
I follow this path headstrong
Blindly leaping into this pit
Diving into love
Infatuation
Loneliness
And lust
Are the guides of our parents
The reason we exist
And the cause of our pains
I say I feel a connection with another
But doesn’t that mean it goes 2 ways?
Disregard the thought of love
And you have a spiritual connection
Between to similar beings
On a chaotic planet
In an even more chaotic...
here
I suppose as I fall I have to trust
That when I reach the bottom
Of this lonely trek
To the bottom of our very beings
I wont be alone
Comments on "The Drama That Drives Me"
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On Friday, January 7, 2005, spaniellie
(76) wrote:
your first line had me until the last. very well written. the flow is great and i related oh to well. great job!
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A former member wrote:
it's true there is an abundance of pain, and questioning...but a hint of optimism, at least in a spiritual sense.very god write.crush.
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
this switches between a few different topics but is truly fascinating and very thoughtful...
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
impressive...that at 18 you are this enlightened within your darkness...I love it! I agree with methos!
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
Truth and depth, emotions and heart, this piece is outstanding! A true work of art. Your talent is truly breath taking...-Methos
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, suicideseason
(1636) wrote:
*agrees with Methos and Jaded.*...you do have worlds of talent.this is very powerful.never stop writing or...i don't know.:)tim
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A former member wrote:
trust is the hardest part...very honest piece