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- "on the water is a phrase usually meaning "next to the water" tin foil sheet is just the sun's reflection across the bay"
Posted by alesana on "Campus on the Bay" by alesana
- "Great imagery. Wondering about green velvet water and then a tin foil bay shortly thereafter, perhaps a conflict here? Or maybe just me, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Campus on the Bay" by alesana
- "I've been on for a while, but just renewed my account (kinda had to pry Dad's credit card number out of him xD)"
Posted by alesana on "When the Sun Falls" by alesana
- "this strikes me that his collection has
history, and memories. only to be
more or less given away with no
appreciation for the value of such
memories. i enjoyed this alesana.
maybe one day your poems will be
treasured by family they call aunt
alesana!"
Posted by haunted on "My Uncle's Library" by alesana
- "alesana! i havnt heard your sweet voice in a while. i love your poem, and it
sounds like theres a war with words.
and you got hurt. you have to be strong
and keep going. people dont realize
what a word can do to a person, it
does hurt. either bullying or from
abuse, just cut your damn throat
right. because the pain just the same.
great job, im looking forward to more
posts from you."
Posted by haunted on "Sanguis Solis (Blood of the Sun)" by alesana
- "The opening line "silence in a misty wood.damp like tears from God" is awesome. The flow is great. conclusion is also nice.no flaws at all. thanks for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "The Final Strike" by alesana
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