Comments by All Members
- "I can hear this whispered in my head... the repetition of words ("sand and sand and sand," etc.) gives it a great deal of beauty and strength."
Posted by stormtalk on "game" by red_haze
- "Show dear Alice something real about you, stun her with that which is yourself, and she'll fly towards you like a car to one of those huge junkyard magnets."
Posted by stormtalk on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "Maybe Alice likes truths... honesty's the best tool out there, you just have to learn how to use it to its fullest. "
Posted by stormtalk on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "The punctuation gives this one a jerkiness that drags the reader from consciously seeing meaning to experiencing pure imagery and emotion... awesome."
Posted by stormtalk on "sick" by red_haze
- "So detached and alone... This conveys something of a desolation and comlements my despise of cities and the conglomerated mass of humanity. "
Posted by Solace on "expatriate" by red_haze
- "I've only read 2 of your poems...and you're already going straight to my favorites...I absolutely LOVE your work..."
Posted by Exodus on "sunday's child" by red_haze
- "i didn't quite catch all the meaning of this but i will come back and try again, what i did catch of it though has a vivid and sharp imagery. excellent piece"
Posted by nell on "lense" by red_haze
- "honestly, thank you, for reading and leaving such nice comments."
Posted by red_haze on "lense" by red_haze
- "i was hoping to find something everyone could relate to in some way. - thanks for the comments. :)"
Posted by red_haze on "...enough" by red_haze
- "There's no choice, but for it to be enough... i can relate maybe a little too well... loved the first few lines "and our words.meet.in the middle/
...like we are. strangers." Beautiful, ~gothic~
"
Posted by GothicBlack on "...enough" by red_haze
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