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...enough
By red_haze
here, there is too much.
distance.... between us..
and our words meet in the middle
...like we are strangers.
but i hold onto those moments...
and in the car...
i'm loosing you to each mile.
i'm starving for more than
just a few... mornings.
and yet, i have to make that... enough.
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Copyright 2003 red_haze
Published on Tuesday, October 21, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, Sin
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wrote:
oO...I have been there, felt this. Can anything hurt as much as seperation? "and in the car...I'm loosing you to each mile" this hurt in the most delightful way today..thank you for sharing ~k
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
i like....talent is deffinatly present in this work....
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you. :)
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A former member wrote:
Is it enough, though?
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
There's no choice, but for it to be enough... i can relate maybe a little too well... loved the first few lines "and our words.meet.in the middle/ ...like we are. strangers." Beautiful, ~gothic~
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
i was hoping to find something everyone could relate to in some way. - thanks for the comments. :)
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
a great tale of yearning
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you
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