sunday's child
By red_haze
on sunday…
i watch you worship
genuflecting to the sky
in a mockery of selfless submission
the robes of faith
tucked and folded beneath your arm
unmarred by the sweat of toil
or the blood of sacrifice
idol in your pocket
brass in the likeness of gold
and your sore lips
occasionally pressed to its round face
stripped and panting
making love to your hero
splayed and bent
offering your body
in a lustful act of penance
erect in your glory
stained with your own favor
and your words
pronounced with love
spoken in the tongue of lies
your devotion like unto a deity
with only fleshy remnants
of a war within your swelled head
divine bribery
such a sweet offering to him
a child in the guise of man
a whore who thinks himself a nun
and your god
a pornographic picture
of an ageless boy
your dark eyes alight
with boyish delight
while you declare yourself pure
as sunday's child
Comments on "sunday's child"
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On Monday, November 8, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
wow...wow
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, nesbia
(15) wrote:
hehe that is truly great
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Good rhythym and content... and everyone loves a religious sex poem! I love your writing... yeah, on to my favorites you go.
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
I've only read 2 of your poems...and you're already going straight to my favorites...I absolutely LOVE your work...
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you so much. i am flattered you would add me as a favorite.
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A former member wrote:
I like, I like. Keep your skills.
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you. :) i much appreciate your comment.
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On Friday, October 24, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
vary nice, i had to read it 2 times but it was worth the time~~~Grave
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you so much. i know my writing can be comfusing, so i appologise.
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On Friday, October 24, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
As always...a pleasure wrapped within a pleasure. ~ mw
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
again, thank you. your comments mean a lot.
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A former member wrote:
Many pleasures. This was amazing.
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
many thanks to you for your far-to-nice comment.