Comments by All Members
- "superbly effective in succinct and clever wording. brevity does not necessarily result in ineffectual poetry! well wielded. :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "icarus" by red_haze
- "thank you. mature is never a word i'd have associated with my work. you've made my day. :)"
Posted by red_haze on "expatriate" by red_haze
- "thanks. i think. haha. though i'm not sure this is worth notice. it's so short and pointless."
Posted by red_haze on "icarus" by red_haze
- "what the fuck.. this was a blast. awsome poetry.. *bows before haze* i shall read the rest of your now.. *drools for more*"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "icarus" by red_haze
- "For a poem that mentions colorlessness... this one's very colorful. It has the tone of rust and rot and decay, like old pipes underground... I like it a lot. I keep checking your page to see if you've written more, but you never do... feed us more!"
Posted by stormtalk on "color.you" by red_haze
- "I think we only like the pretty lies because we so rarely see the truths... but if someone were to show me truth, it would drag me in quickly."
Posted by stormtalk on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "thank you. i appreciate all forms of comment and criticism. the 'missing' piece.. it's true. something is missing. my patriotism. i harbor hate for a home that does not welcome."
Posted by red_haze on "expatriate" by red_haze
- "i am glad someone can relate. though i don't necessarly hate cities, i do hate my country. i am sure this offends many people, but truly, i long to live abroad."
Posted by red_haze on "expatriate" by red_haze
- "thank you for the lovely comments.
and perhaps he does like truths. but people never seem to present that side. i suppose we all like the pretty lies best most times."
Posted by red_haze on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "This isn't my favorite of your poems - it feels like it's missing something. Not that I don't like it... its strength lies in its simplicity, something I'm always a fan of."
Posted by stormtalk on "expatriate" by red_haze
- "Good rhythym and content... and everyone loves a religious sex poem! I love your writing... yeah, on to my favorites you go."
Posted by stormtalk on "sunday's child" by red_haze
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