icarus

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his are broken.
he cannot fly.
he scrapes along the bottom,
skinning his knees as he begs.
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Published on Sunday, February 1, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "icarus"

On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, stormtalk (727) wrote:

Hmm... honestly, I think your other work is much more colorful and interesting. Even so, though, there's something cryptic about this one that puts it above the average poem. It doesn't spend time *trying* to be mysterious, it just *is*. I like that.
On Friday, February 27, 2004, red_haze (52) wrote:

thanks. i'm flattered by your words.
On Sunday, February 1, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

superbly effective in succinct and clever wording. brevity does not necessarily result in ineffectual poetry! well wielded. :) purr
On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, red_haze (52) wrote:

thank you. i don't deserve such a compliment.
On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

what the fuck.. this was a blast. awsome poetry.. *bows before haze* i shall read the rest of your now.. *drools for more*
On Sunday, February 1, 2004, red_haze (52) wrote:

thanks. i think. haha. though i'm not sure this is worth notice. it's so short and pointless.
On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (328) wrote:

nothing is pointless...if it meant enough to you to write it...then thats all the point it needs
On Sunday, February 1, 2004, red_haze (52) wrote:

you have a point. a good one. so, thank you. very much.