Comments by All Members
- "much appreciation for your comment. the breaks and punctuation were a visual way of presenting pause, and stutter, and the inability to get it all out at once. as if it were spoken on a broken beat."
Posted by red_haze on "color.you" by red_haze
- "thanks. and yes, i hate that. something always gets lost in my head, and it usually completely stops me in my tracks until i find it. "
Posted by red_haze on "color.you" by red_haze
- "thank you. i suppose everyone feels the need to try a little harder, and they feel the strain when it doesn't work. i am glad you found something in this. :)"
Posted by red_haze on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "inspiration from my friend masa. - i wasn't sure how well my style would work. thanks for the confidence you've just given me."
Posted by red_haze on "sick" by red_haze
- "thanks! i was trying to be visually vocal. i appreciate your comment. "
Posted by red_haze on "sick" by red_haze
- "wow i love your style of writing. it fasinates me. this is definatly one of those great poems you can't forget even if you tried. i love it"
Posted by Unknown on "sick" by red_haze
- "ahh i like it..reminds me of someone but i dont know who, dont you hate that??"
Posted by yslehc on "color.you" by red_haze
- "good poem.. i feel like that sometimes, doing something different to yourself that no one probably notices even though you did it to increase the possibility of a certain someone noticing.. lol well thats what i got out of it. i liked it "
Posted by yslehc on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "...this is very powerful...and quite an interesting form, if I say so myself... -Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "sick" by red_haze
- "i had to come back to this to re-read it, it's a really good write but i am still nto sure as to what it represents, it reminds me of an obsessive compulsive tick parallel."
Posted by nell on ".the afterthoughts of parallel." by red_haze
- "wow i resally enjoyed this read it has a rich imagery embeded in it. "on the, con.crete like... tequila dreams. from a balcony,"absolutly perfect!
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Posted by nell on "sick" by red_haze
- "i dont really know what to say to this and dont take that the wrong way i'm not with it today, so i like it and dont worry i like it i do"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "color.you" by red_haze
- "i love this- i love the breaks, i love the punctuation, i love the moodiness of this... beautiful."
Posted by KittyStryker on "color.you" by red_haze
