Comments by All Members
- "oO...I have been there, felt this. Can anything hurt as much as seperation? "and in the car...I'm loosing you to each mile" this hurt in the most delightful way today..thank you for sharing ~k"
Posted by Sin on "...enough" by red_haze
- "i felt compelled to read this backwards.... and it made perfect sense. simply amazing."
Posted by elisa on "game" by red_haze
- "I've nothing of worth to say to this.. truly remarkable! hmm, is that a contradiction? er well, most enjoyed all the same :) ~b"
Posted by blue on "minus eloquence" by red_haze
- "-hence, i assume, the shaking of the hands... the uncertainty associated with such passions, and the cruel accompanying idea that our reality may also be dream."
Posted by not an addict on "minus eloquence" by red_haze
- "still, reality is only relative... and it could be argued that, in affecting the creation of such poetry as this, said dreams take on a reality all their own."
Posted by not an addict on "minus eloquence" by red_haze
- "it can be a thin line, at times, to differentiate between dream and reality (more so, even, when it is just the dream we would have as our reality)."
Posted by not an addict on "minus eloquence" by red_haze
- "This one's interesting in that it's from another perspective. Mostly, these poems are about being lied TO, rather than lying, yourself. It's nicely done, and a good change of pace. I commend you."
Posted by Thorn on "cheshire..." by red_haze
- "I really liked the second and last stanzas. I could really feel the confusion and can definitely relate to this. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "game" by red_haze
- "A theme after my own heart and soul...Favorites definately...Thank you for writing on the theme of the Fool in such an intense and wonderful way... *Bows*"
Posted by Solace on "fool and king" by red_haze
- "This is really very beautiful. "unfolded a story, a moments fine legend. and i tip my hat to the dream"; how exquisite this is~I'm going to add this to my favourites~ enchanting, whimsical with sensitive, extroardinary imagery. I could read this over and"
Posted by Unknown on "fool and king" by red_haze
- "over *smiles* ~ Beautiful write, eloquent, unblemished, to say the very, very least. With sincere compliments ~ Rose.
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Posted by Unknown on "fool and king" by red_haze
- "so profoundly put. im impressed. i can totally relate and i couldnt have said it better. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "...enough" by red_haze
- "there are quotable lines all over this thing. damn gina, if im not impressed then knock me over with a feather."
Posted by Twilight on "lense" by red_haze
- "i cant even catch my breath after this one. who astonishing. emotion rollercoasters..."your smile flickers technicolor" "gold key in your back
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Posted by Twilight on "lense" by red_haze
- "i love this, i like ur use of imagery and the great overal flow of the poem. i esp love the last word "colourless." great dramatic ending! "
Posted by Unknown on "color.you" by red_haze
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