fool and king
By red_haze
a fool dances on the rim of my hat,
waving his long fingers in shamful mockery,
his painted smile, crooked and compassionate;
he lends me the fine dream i wander.
a humored king, eyes dancing,
is enthroned on a gold dias in my head,
watching the motleyed jester;
the madcap swaying to ring his costume bells.
the charade plays out like a game of cards;
the king's foutune turned and tipped,
spilling out like wine from a glass,
staining the floor with his color.
curved-toe boots splash though majesty's time;
the footprints of an angeless step;
such a dance twisted with riddles,
as the fool treads a king's dreams.
as celebrates an evening, a feast.
a time never passed, whittles the minutes;
for a single moment's light jest,
and a smile to extend a lonely evening.
revere swept away, a fingers breadth of time,
so long... a noble king forgotten,
and my harlequin prince fades away;
though my head weighs with his warm laughter.
what memory keeps, my fool and king;
in my heart: a grin and a bow,
unfolded a story, a moments fine legend.
and i tip my hat to the dream.
Comments on "fool and king"
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
A theme after my own heart and soul...Favorites definately...Thank you for writing on the theme of the Fool in such an intense and wonderful way... *Bows*
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A former member wrote:
This is really very beautiful. "unfolded a story, a moments fine legend. and i tip my hat to the dream"; how exquisite this is~I'm going to add this to my favourites~ enchanting, whimsical with sensitive, extroardinary imagery. I could read this over and
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A former member wrote:
over *smiles* ~ Beautiful write, eloquent, unblemished, to say the very, very least. With sincere compliments ~ Rose.
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, manicheism
(43) wrote:
i've partly realized why i like your work, it makes me feel i know you. great poem, keep producicng.
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Hey this was great. A whimsical ride that I've never taken before. I was entertained by the joker's dancing feet by majestic words of royalty. :) :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
"a fool dances on the rim of my hat, waving his long fingers in shamful mockery" Wow, such interesting images played in my head as I read this. Very nice. ~Wish Upon A Star