Comments by All Members
- "Antaya invites the reader to begin again, much as a traditional fairy tale story asserts that every ending is the natural loop of opportunity to return to the point of beginning. This poem intends to push the reader into the realm of myth and reality—that which instructs us most in myth and fairy story is the message between the layers of language and narrative, much like how life imitates art. All good stories invite revisiting, and Monsters is no exception."
Posted by Unknown on "Monsters" by Antaya
- "I went on this journey with you. Carried away. And that's how it's done. Nice work"
Posted by Damien on "Alone" by Antaya
- "Hey Antaya! Sounds like the double helix to me, possibly something locked away in the DNA? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Hallucinogenics " by Antaya
- "I love the way that you developed this piece. It gets stronger with each stanza."
Posted by Unknown on "Poison" by Antaya
- "Wow great work, this evokes some memories about childhood friend of mine. Keep it up :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Poison" by Antaya
- "A sad read to be sure, mostly because I can't tell if you want to change who you are because you don't like yourself, or because someone else doesn't like you. If its the first I wish you luck to grow into the person you wish to be, if its the second I'd say no one is worth changing who you are for, even if its to spite them."
Posted by Unknown on "I try to kill her. Every night." by Antaya
- "Antaya, good grief girl, at age 16 is it you are so despondent? Believe me you will soon have them all drooling so be cool and let nature take its course. And forget all the liars with self-centered motives, cheers! Most of all, be good to yourself!"
Posted by dwells on "I try to kill her. Every night." by Antaya
- "We all have our monsters: some of them are bigger than others, and harder to control. You can drive me insane - but it's a short trip!"
Posted by dwells on "Where is the monster?" by Antaya
- "this was fantastic. it was an addiction. once my eyes read the first line i was gone. beyond help. this was.. i don't know. brilliant ? the face of perfection?
i'll let you drive me insane anytime so as long as i can read this again and again and again.."
Posted by Unknown on "Where is the monster?" by Antaya
- "You are going to be a writer when u get older, i just know it. All of these poems you write that everyone loves. All about one person, that broke your heart. Someday that person will read these and wish he didn't but he wont be able to take it back. "
Posted by Unknown on "tears left unseen" by Antaya
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