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tears left unseen
By Antaya
My stupid insecurities,
wormed their way inside my head,
making
me a selfconcious fool,
hating every tear i shed,
for you.
Like a latern in the darkest night,
the moon shines through,
Like the winner of a fight,
you leave me wanting you.
A
stinging burn,
behind my eyes,
i have to learn,
to hide
my cries.
Its stifiling in the sun,
the heat will boil
my blood,
So will the things i've done,
My mind sinking deeper
in to the mud.
Thoughts race across my mind,
Sinking in
from time to time,
The empty feeling leaves me blind,
cuz against
you i've committed no crime.
I turn to face the wall,
tears
slipping unseen,
wishing i would fall,
but all i can do is lean.
trapped inside my empty brain,
I see you walk away,
I
try to call your name,
but i know you'll never stay.
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Copyright 2011 Antaya
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A former member wrote:
Good write really speaks to people who are going through bad breakups and/or are lonely.
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A former member wrote:
You are going to be a writer when u get older, i just know it. All of these poems you write that everyone loves. All about one person, that broke your heart. Someday that person will read these and wish he didn't but he wont be able to take it back.
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A former member wrote:
you left me speechless.. =) great write
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On Monday, June 13, 2011, pureevil8
(48)
wrote:
Well writen saddness is always so beautiful on paper. Exellent write.
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A former member wrote:
this hit me deep. your imagery is superb and brilliant. emotionally alluring and very, very raw. i really enjoyed this. i hope decide to join DP :)
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A former member wrote:
quite the rhyme, very smooth and lyrical.... *hide* ? maybe? thanks for sharing and welcome to the valley, as ^V^ would say ...
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A former member wrote:
Wow the last two stanzas really got me. "Wishing I would fall/But all I can do is lean" Wow, that hit me somewhere deep.
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