Comments by All Members
- "I must thank you for recognizing this work. It has a special place in my heart that still hurt to this day. Your praise, the fact that you took in every detail. Including my mistakes, emotion, scenery, and author's note. Thank you. With all of my heart, thank you for reading this. I am glad you enjoyed this."
Posted by ArcticWolf999 on "Written From My Cell Phone" by ArcticWolf999
- "Wow.. This little "journal" from you is just amazing and very well penned.. The imagery was very vivid across the read.. I could inclusively feel all the emotions and feelings that you expressed.. Your love, your hate, your disillusion, your pain.. And the whole text is very descriptive and detailed, your prose is just inspiring.. And what surprised me the most was the text's tittle and your author's note.. You wrote all this beauty on your cell, going to the magical place where all your thoughts and feelings converge.. Just amazing.. You are such a talented writer.. Thanks for sharing this wonderful journey.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Written From My Cell Phone" by ArcticWolf999
- "This is sooo beautiful and a pleasure to read! I loved how you refered to videogames and put it together into a sweet love poem.. Very creative Miss ArticWolf999 (I like your nickname very much!).. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "My Lover" by ArcticWolf999
- "Great piece! I felt like a monster as I read.. I lovedspecially the third stanza.. What you wrote there is a huge truth, without a will there isn't a way.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Monster" by ArcticWolf999
- "love is in the air .. an acknowledgement / recognition .. all around and about seemingly .. something beautiful is amissssss ..."
Posted by Scorpio999 on "My Lover" by ArcticWolf999
- "I coment on this just once more to let any readers know this was literately written from my cell phone on the walk there. It is a bit choppy but that's because it was pouring out and i was trying not to get my phone wet and pay more attention to my surroundings. And to let any readers know that his place, my favorite spot, was bulldozed to ground two and a half years ago. My heart broke...
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Posted by ArcticWolf999 on "Written From My Cell Phone" by ArcticWolf999
- "First and foremost, I wouldn't comment on something I don't like, so this I definitely find interesting. One detail was the spelling, which on one hand it gives this piece a sort of edge. It makes it crusty and seems to be intentionally "sloppy" (not that it is). Something else i noticed was the backwards title...NICE! Thats exactly why i came here :) this piece has a lot of hidden innovations, and i like it. keep them coming! Hugs~"
Posted by Anton Kozel on "Ytinamuh Tsol" by ArcticWolf999
- "This was trully a emotionally deep poem. The last few lines remind me of a Breaking Benjamin song tho, called I Will Not Bow. You might like it, if you dont kno it already:) "
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Assortment" by ArcticWolf999
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