Comments by All Members
- "Hmm, feeling is so familiar. People always tell me a good person, even though I don't see it. What they don't know is I'm a better liar than the devil. My past taught me how to lie and make it more believable than truth. Had to, to survive. This poem expresses every feeling and emotion that runs through my body. Thank you for this. It's.... it's closer to my soul than words can describe."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "I'm Not A Nice Guy" by Ultimate Mistake
- "Conflicted? Yeah, girls have that effect on guys most of the time. Emotions... seems we'd get alot further in life without them huh? Very emotional piece man. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "She makes me Feel things" by Ultimate Mistake
- "Hi and please keep this first person and change the penultimate line to something like "...not what I want to hear". This was too good for a lapse into the wrong tense. Sorry for the criticality, thanks "
Posted by dwells on "The Girl with Apple Lips" by Ultimate Mistake
- "Hi U.M. the third and next to last lines are exactly what Meatloaf sang about when he crashed his bike and lay dying. This was a big hit about 15 years ago (I'm dating myself) - thanks. "
Posted by dwells on "A Deadly Reaction to Her" by Ultimate Mistake
- "I quite the like the metaphor you have used in the first line of 'stars on a sunny day' for things unseen...you could hang on to that idea and maybe expand on it in a longer piece sometime...write on..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Astrology" by Ultimate Mistake
- "oops... you did it again...I think you need 'astrology' in the title...and...'it' ... and 'it's' ...just saying...:D ... cheer up :D ... it gets better....."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Astrology" by Ultimate Mistake
- "Moving is the second most stressful time in our lives - right in between divorce (or loss of a loved one) and loss of a good job / career. All life changing events and part of who we are. Thanks for the thoughtful piece, and know that Dad's are usually the most fun."
Posted by dwells on "Moving on to new Places" by Ultimate Mistake
- "This sounds so familiar, this feeling. The internal contradiction of showing the world all is well coupled with that need to be painfully honest, but having no one care enough to notice. really well captured"
Posted by Lylani on "For All You Know" by Ultimate Mistake
- ":) very serene... yep, the beach is a beautiful place..... where waves go to die.... maybe. welcome to the valley and thanks."
Posted by Unknown on ""Happy Place"" by Ultimate Mistake
- "I know how you feel. People are so completely ignorant to the chaos around them. Even if you dont want them to see what your hiding, its disapointing to know that they dont even want to. Like they dont care enough to try to figure it out. Anyways, im done rambling...really great poem."
Posted by Unknown on "For All You Know" by Ultimate Mistake
