A Deadly Reaction to Her
By Ultimate Mistake
Butterflies flutter in my stomach with razor wings
I grab my chest
as my heart skips beats
Gasping can no longer fill collapsing lungs
with air
Ceasing to breathe may happen whenever she's near
One
thousand fireworks set off my imagination
One thousand waves crash
on the shore of a mystic ocean
She is just inches out of reach
and if I even try to get my hands on her she slips away
Teasing
finger tips just like falling sand
I frantically try to hold it in
my hand,
but it's just useless!
The mist of pain and melancholy
hits my face
Tears fall from my eyes, I curse at the wind!
My
heart sprouts wings and flies out of my chest
I watch, in horror,
as it flies off into the sunset
Solemn nostalgia...is all thats left
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Copyright 2011 Ultimate Mistake
Author's Note:
I wrote this about a girl who i really liked; she moved away before i could tell her how i feltComments on "A Deadly Reaction to Her"
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A former member wrote:
baby i love you, perfect
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On Thursday, November 3, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Reminiscent of Meatloaf's Bat out of Hell, at least for me. Very well done and towers above the usual fare on this subject.
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On Thursday, November 3, 2011, Ultimate Mistake
(21) wrote:
What did you mean in that first sentence? I'm kinda confused lol
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On Thursday, November 3, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Hi U.M. the third and next to last lines are exactly what Meatloaf sang about when he crashed his bike and lay dying. This was a big hit about 15 years ago (I'm dating myself) - thanks.
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On Saturday, November 5, 2011, Ultimate Mistake
(21) wrote:
I feel odd know. Meatloaf(in my opinion) sucks =\. Finding out that i came up with something similar to what he's written is a huge downer lol. Well...thanks for your comment anyways