The Girl with Apple Lips

By Ultimate Mistake

I crave for your body to be against mine.
Our arms intertwined.
Your head on my shoulder.
We'd be happy together.
We'd be glad to have each other.
Even now I shiver from your touch.
The temptation is too much.
Those powdery lips drive me insane.
My heart can hardly be contained.
I want your hand...
Please, give me a chance.
I could lead you to somewhere fantastic.
A place where magic and true love can exist.
Where happiness is closer for us to pick.
Where it's easier to ignore any bullshit.
My ears are teased by your siren song.
The question is being suffocated for too long.
It needs to breathe, but I'm afraid to loosen my hold.
If only I could truely know...
Rejection is not what I want from her.
All I seek is a "Happily Ever After"

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Copyright 2012 Ultimate Mistake
Published on Tuesday, January 3, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Amazing poem future husband

  • dwells On Tuesday, January 3, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Hi and please keep this first person and change the penultimate line to something like "...not what I want to hear". This was too good for a lapse into the wrong tense. Sorry for the criticality, thanks

  • Ultimate Mistake On Saturday, January 21, 2012, Ultimate Mistake (21)By person wrote:

    hahah, its ok. I need this if i want to improve my style. Thank you for your support :)

  • Devilish On Tuesday, January 3, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Awee.. How sweet.. I love this.. Hello there... Scholar

  • Ultimate Mistake On Saturday, January 21, 2012, Ultimate Mistake (21)By person wrote:

    thank you. hi

  • A former member wrote: wonderfuly lovely

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