Comments by All Members
- "each time my heart gets broken, but then I shrug it off. I've turned a bit callous over the years."
Posted by SulaMoon on "Bloody Heart" by SulaMoon
- "Revenge is such a sweet sweet inspiration, you ever wonder if they know what they did?"
Posted by Iwas on "Bloody Heart" by SulaMoon
- "what more could one wish for? I had to smile at the line... for us to beat all the odds... isn't that the truth...... worse than winning the power ball. ravishing wishes, well expressed. Welcome to the Valley, as ^V^ would say....."
Posted by Unknown on "A Wish" by SulaMoon
- "The razor passes through my flesh
My ribs are pulled apart
I can feel your cold, dead hands
As they are ripping out my heart
i instantly feel your anger and sadness and i'm sad but i feel a relief as the brutality of this is what it truly feels like love lost is something like this."
Posted by Unknown on "Bloody Heart" by SulaMoon
- "Not a problem I've ever had or really understood but I really like this piece. You can feel the crazy seeping out of each word. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Insomnia" by SulaMoon
- "Brilliant account of depression and its rotten grip on the soul...Love those closing lines loaded with hope."
Posted by carlosjackal on "True Friend" by SulaMoon
- "Sounds like my brand of insomnia, knowing that every time your eyes shut, you're sent to the mind's twisted playground. Excellent work, I could feel the madness swirling about as I read this."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Insomnia" by SulaMoon
- "sad and deep, but very well written(check for one or two small spelling errors)
hope things improve with you. chin up.
welcome to dp and thank you for sharing"
Posted by natalie on "Sweet Relief" by SulaMoon
