Comments by All Members
- "As they said in Physics class "Nature abhors a vacuum" and your metaphor was indeed perfect (I use plastic wood), cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Lost Pieces" by brokensme
- "I applaud you brokensme.. Very insightful through the transition of day. I loved how some of the words rolled around in my head then off of my tongue. Very awesome write. 10/10 : ))"
Posted by soul_versing on "The Cycle of Life and Death" by brokensme
- "Hon, know that you have support now even when you choose not to make the best choices.. Family are those we choose to be with. Love the expressiveness in this poem.. remember you can open up in person too.
Love you!!"
Posted by Regnhild on "The Long Road to Recovery" by brokensme
- "good poem and glad you came back to me xD and yeah its a long road but you got people you can rely on now. Always.. Lean on me when you need too. You know I'm always gonna be here.. While I'll make you learn the hard way at time..(cause its the only way you'll learn) I still love you fool. Now yeah great poem!!"
Posted by BrokenKatra on "The Long Road to Recovery" by brokensme
- "I must apologize if my commenting on your work seems trite! Your words are from your soul therefore I feel it is a wonderful piece. The emotion is thick as you read, making the reader feel the writers intentions. Very well penned. "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "What Do I Need?" by brokensme
- "Sweetie.. Good guys finish last but they have more to finish with.. They are the ones that everyone is jealous of.. Don't let this world change you. I'm here to understand you anytime sweetie just poke me XD i'll listen"
Posted by BrokenKatra on "Good Guys" by brokensme
- "I love the good guy approach, pouring your heart out onto every line, longing for someone to understand you.. This was sincere and touching.. I only hope you remain ever so sweet, despite, the cruel worlds intentions.. "
Posted by soul_versing on "Good Guys" by brokensme
- "Damn.. I had been wanting to read this and couldnt figure out why i hadn't .. now i know. this is tragically lovely. i dont want you to die ofcourse. i hope the toaster doesnt answer you . much love baby. "
Posted by Devilish on "Ode to my Toaster" by brokensme
- "funny then sad.. i hate it..but it is really well written x.x and no taking baths with toasters..you can take a bath with a peach instead :D"
Posted by BrokenKatra on "Ode to my Toaster" by brokensme
- "I think we all write for pain, at least to some degree. There's always something eating away at me whenever I put pen to paper. I can't do it just of my own volition.
Great work. Very expressive and emotional "
Posted by Elle Amore on "Write to be understood" by brokensme
- "Perfection.. I love the detail lingering into each word describing your emotion. Expressing yourself regardless who decides to listen anymore. I LoVe it.. 10"
Posted by soul_versing on "Write to be understood" by brokensme
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