Comments by All Members
- "Wow. Lovely work, and the ending really has a powerful, surprise PUNCH that i wasn't expecting.. Short and bitter. Good work."
Posted by megaprime81 on "Shooting Stars" by Perkele
- "This is one I will have to return to. You cover a lot of ground in a short span. Something to think on here...I may return to comment on this one again. Thanks for the unique & challenging work, Perkele."
Posted by Unknown on "How to be a Man" by Perkele
- "definitely an interesting read, introspection I assume. very intriguing philosophy.. well met and well written."
Posted by Skye on "How to be a Man" by Perkele
- "this was pretty lovely. five little lords conjures up the images of five little mischievous boys in their sunday's best for me. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "How to be a Man" by Perkele
- ""Nine spiders and ten lies" I'm going to have to ponder this alot more before I can properly comment. Much enjoyed the read and that last line. "
Posted by River Lily on "How to be a Man" by Perkele
- "Loved this, the opening lines were amazing great write friend. Hope you are well."
Posted by River Lily on "Again" by Perkele
- "I could imagine the whole thing in color. Beautiful~"
Posted by Unknown on "Tint" by Perkele
- "...ghosts of forbidden love & unwise desires continue to haunt..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Again" by Perkele
- "A lonely and sterile posting to declare something that I'm still not sure of, but nevertheless, that is quite the intended attraction maybe? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Again" by Perkele
- "ooh a little terror, are we? who ruffled your feathers? lemme at 'em. there is lots of fire in this write....penned it don't punch it and you'll be ok."
Posted by natalie on "untitled taint " by Perkele
- ""the smile I could never pull off" I like how this line works in more than one way, and fits so well with the painting of that 'self' we perhaps can never be.... the end was subtle, intelligent work. thanks."am" I.... ?"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "tattered feathers" by Perkele
- "Of course you do dwells... =)... Well this was a interesting write and thank you for sharing... "
Posted by Devilish on "Rebirth" by Perkele
- "I love poetry based on biblical themes, but seem to be in the minority. The 144,000 chosen for the Rapture in end times and the Samson and Delilah story (he was blinded as well) with yourself somewhere in the middle, intriguing."
Posted by dwells on "Rebirth" by Perkele
- "We are always ourselves, even when we are not i suppose. This is such an interesting concept. Seven selves bashful about life, seven selves in hiding. "
Posted by Unknown on "Seven" by Perkele
- "Parallel universes and seven is one of God's numbers - HMmm... Interesting"
Posted by dwells on "Seven" by Perkele
- "Tasting nicotine with ghost buds before it enters ghost lungs" -chilling piece you have here. Really digging your style my friend."
Posted by Twilight on "Seven" by Perkele
- "This cut right through me. I can relate to this completely and loved reading it. You had me at "lacerated gaze" every line was pure emotion. No holds barred. great writing."
Posted by Twilight on "Lacerated" by Perkele
- "This evaporated in front of me....I'd love to find the balance between change and permanence. A nicely rendered concept. You should visit us again with more writes. "
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Appeased" by Perkele
- "This is trully a work of beuty. Its a shame that it had to written for a reason so unfortunate. The first verse tho, thats wat called to me more than anything else. A real work of art. Thanks for sharing tho. I just recently felt the same emotions, and it messes with your mind and body to an unimaginable degree. im so sorry for your loss. . ."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Fallen and Pounded (Against the Rocks)" by Perkele
- "hmmmm the loss of honesty.... the failure of authenticity..... doesn't it always strip the words away.... like so many hollow question marks..."You're" well penned."
Posted by Unknown on "Was it ever there at all..." by Perkele
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