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- "Thank you for the typo error. This wasnt quite about internet relations, although still technology based. More of a texting relationship with an amazing friend of mine... the concept remains the same"
Posted by pessum ire animus on "Broadway" by pessum ire animus
- ""It's not me" I think was your intended last line (typo?). This was a well developed concept concerning internet relations we are all exposed to on a daily basis. Well done and thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Broadway" by pessum ire animus
- "Heartfelt words that I can relate to, I just had to let go, waiting can be such an eternity and life is not. I hope your wait is worth your precious time...... A beautiful write."
Posted by Magdalena on "Because I Do" by pessum ire animus
- "For me, cutting was helpful as can be. I have done it over 200 times... and the scars are adding up. It isn't wrong, it is as you said- seriously misunderstood. Even the families of the ones who cut do not comprehend or willingly look away when they see the signs. If you have a problem, and are afraid of things like drugs and alcohol, this is a physical high and when you cut, your body releases endorphins that calm you. All the focus goes to the cut, the open wound, which the blood pours. Once, I was shaking uncontrollably out of fear. I ended up with my razor in my hand and cutting my wrist 50 times that night. I have scars, and I do not look back on them with regret nor with shame. It helped. That's my story/opinion. "
Posted by Unknown on "Cutting - The Devil's Advocate" by pessum ire animus
- "I wouldn't say anyone is in a position to judge. MY personal opinion is that cutting is an act of one who is mentally weak. Stronger minds that can deal with difficult situations do not need this 'release'. weaker minds need to find an outlet for survival. not saying being 'weak' is a negative thing, just using it more as a descriptive term."
Posted by Unknown on "Cutting - The Devil's Advocate" by pessum ire animus
- "I didn't read all of this because I couldn't help but think that they need you to give at the blood bank. You lose a pint and get the same rush or catharsis, with no mess and somebody else benefits too - win / win situation I'd think, no? Cutting reminds me of somebody dying by inches perhaps? Or in a self-punishment mode. Sorry, I just don't get it."
Posted by dwells on "Cutting - The Devil's Advocate" by pessum ire animus
- "Lovely ending and uplifting too. A couple typos in the last two stanzas detracted slightly, thanks for this offering."
Posted by dwells on "Three" by pessum ire animus
- "It is less the president, and more the mealy-mouthed morons who insist that we have a "kinder, gentler military" This crap would have been over years ago, if they would just let us go and dominate instead of worrying over hearts and minds. Kinder, gentler, armies only do one thing well, Lose. keep your head down and watch your six brother. come home in better shape than I did. Excellent write."
Posted by Winter Born on "Bullets, people, presidents, and me." by pessum ire animus
- "I enjoyed the choice language used to describe this mural, this dissected facade, perhaps... there is a depth to the expression that lends itself to the reader openly.... and yet, it is broken for all. I like the opposition in the last stanza.... the ending repetition worked for me, as if to bring that solemn tone to the fore. well done, and thank you. ... oh... *by* a *single* blow? maybe?"
Posted by Unknown on "My Mural" by pessum ire animus
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