Road to Hell

By pessum ire animus

I see the cold, so blurry
     So vain
So this is it, no hurry
     No pain
Reflecting on, all fury
     All rain
The road is long, for worry
     For gain

Hear yesterdays, so simple
     So gay
Feel memories, no ripple
     No rays
Control your past, all alone
      All changing
Despise tomorrow, for gone
     For blaming

This road to Hell, so right
     so wrong
Good decisions, no light
     no songs
Is paved with, all fight
     All love
Every good intention, for plight
     For gone

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Copyright 2011 pessum ire animus
Published on Tuesday, December 20, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I very much like this.

  • dwells On Tuesday, December 20, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Most unusual structure but didn't miss a thematic or mental beat for the most part. Well done and thanks.

  • A former member wrote: great rhythm to this. Great poem!

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