Comments by All Members
- "a whole story told in so many words a constant battle fought over and over again how many time has she lost and he won? and vice versa i'm liking what i read so far"
Posted by nightshade on "The Love Of Fantasy" by BlackRobedMage
- "Walk into the night with echoed footsteps,
And failing heart beats... Damn, that was wicked cool. The imagery was outstanding and your words really hit home. Great work.
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Posted by Alanarchy on "Cry For The Night" by BlackRobedMage
- "Hmm...not bad. Not bad at all. It had a really nice flow. And remember, we are our own worst critics. You may think that this isn't a worthwhile read, but I see 4 of us now that disagree."
Posted by Unknown on "The Cure" by BlackRobedMage
- "It's true though. I know there a lot of young writers around here who are amazing and I can only give you my best effort. My work is nothing special... just thoughts like everyone else."
Posted by BlackRobedMage on "The Cure" by BlackRobedMage
- "well, after reading"'m only 15, what do you expect? " and then this poem, you derserve more credit than you give yourself!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Cure" by BlackRobedMage
- "I think it is great and I don't think you should change a thing. I like it how it is...I also know how it feels to give the world for someone and they don't even notice."
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Eternally Yours" by BlackRobedMage
- "Sometimes leaving things vague really works as a great tool to tickle the minds of those peering in. I think it works perfectly in this case, very well done. ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "Eternally Yours" by BlackRobedMage
- "Hmm...if you're thinking of expanding upon this...you could include some details. Right now it's a little vague which actually works out perfect...I really like this...no matter whata you think of it :P"
Posted by Unknown on "Eternally Yours" by BlackRobedMage
- "I love this poem, it makes me think of the love of my life crystal, im gunna make he read this...on the other hand, i think the ending might be a little abrupt, you might wanna try and exspand it a bit...never theless, this poem is going tomy favorits the"
Posted by WinterGrave on "Eternally Yours" by BlackRobedMage
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