Away

By BlackRobedMage

I wish I could live in my fantisies
No longer in my reality
Fly away to the place of my dreams
Where no one can find me

I never want to return
To a place I can't call my home
On my face the tears would burn
I was always left alone

I'm going away
So far away
To a place where I wont be rejected

Safe inside myself
Inside of my mind
A place to escape

I want to get away
Please set me free
No one can save me

I wish to never wake
From my deepest slumber
I don't want to face the day
Leave me in the dark

I don't want to hear the lies
I don't want to feel the pain
When I look into your eyes
It just doesn't feel the same


It could be like a song if you repeat the middle three verses as like a chorus. I'm not sure, maybe I'm wrong?

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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Tuesday, September 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love this. So true in so many ways, I wake all the time thinking the same thing

  • Rebel_Angel On Monday, October 6, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I love the last four lines! The "song" (I think it could be one) is great!

  • worm On Tuesday, September 9, 2003, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    your right... a song it could be! I kinda hear a "three doors down" type of thing going on here... nice!

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