Lost In My World Of Darkness

By BlackRobedMage


Darkness has befallen
Light can't be found
No sight to be seen
Nor any kind of sound

Soul lies empty
Lost and alone
Darkness has fallen, Light can't be found

Heart has been broken
It beats no more
I will lie here forever
On this cold floor

Forgotten and cold
Pale and still
Heart has been broken, It beats no more

Help cannot come
I cannot break free
The only things around
Torment me

Pain is brought
Everyday and night
Help will not come, I cannot break free

Despair in my heart
Lost hope in my eyes
There's only darkness around
To listen to my cries

Darkness around me
Voices aren't heard
Despair in my heart, Lost hope in my eyes

My soul is exposed
Broken is my mind
Help cannot come
I, they will never save

Alone in my dark world
Longer than eternity
My soul is exposed, Broken is my mind

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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Tuesday, August 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • -Oz- On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, -Oz- (131)By person wrote:

    that was beautiful. it sang to my heart and hit me where i could feel it most, and made me remeber those feelings...i like how every other verse was the way it was......-Oz-

  • _Andrew_ On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    very nice write, *~*aNDReW*~*

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  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    this is a write that seems to have a meaning behind it but i'm not sure i found it, nice write

  • Rebel_Angel On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I think I have to agree, but it is nice

  • BlackRobedMage On Sunday, September 28, 2003, BlackRobedMage (16)By person wrote:

    It means exactly what it says.

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